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May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is sooooo sweet!! A lovely read. Update soon, I like feeling all warm and cuddely.
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May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok i love your story
but i have to say my favorite parts are when you
have the conversations before and after the chapter...
you make me happy... gives big hug...
but i have to say my favorite parts are when you
have the conversations before and after the chapter...
you make me happy... gives big hug...
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May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, i'm so happy for Naru and Sasu!! Twins how kawai!!!! Story's really progressed. Update soon!
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May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello. It's been quite a while, hasn't it? I would appreciate if you put me on the chapter alert list, so I can know when chapters come out and then read and review them.
Truthfully, if you have too many fics to do, then I say finish one, then move on to the next so you don't have as much work. Do one at a time, or you can just drop a couple of them. After reading a whole bunch of other fanfics, I realized that yours can use some improvement (no offense). There needs to be more character development, and fluff doesn't hurt either. See you next chapter!
Truthfully, if you have too many fics to do, then I say finish one, then move on to the next so you don't have as much work. Do one at a time, or you can just drop a couple of them. After reading a whole bunch of other fanfics, I realized that yours can use some improvement (no offense). There needs to be more character development, and fluff doesn't hurt either. See you next chapter!
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May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!! your writting is incredible. I love the way you capture each scene as if it were real. ^_^ Great job.
(And your lemons are excelent)
(And your lemons are excelent)
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May 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sorry for reviewing so late i've been busy. well love the chapter and i'm glad hes having it narutally. and the reasons why is really....real. lol my brain isnt working as of the moment and i ROFL when i read that he's be getting breast to feed the baby. well see ya next chapter, which i hope is soon. ^.^ l8r!
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May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol.. Birth canal... i want to see Sakura's face when she hears that one! any howz.. still a great story! keep up the good work..
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May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i am loving every word of it. Thank god you explaned the birth canal and C-section cause it got kinda disturbing for a minutes there.
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May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i think hineymoon is funny to you should keep it. i love why orange so much and the really sad part is when you update on aff and i happen to see it whatever chapter you stop at i end up going to fanfic and finishing. i like the authors notes by the way they are always funny. are you going to have the same guest show up and if so why isn't he on your list of the smexest (i believe your list is near perfect).
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May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol >.> nice story especially naruto's pregnancy a few things could make it better but still i think that if you get a picture of a baby thats naru/sasu that would be great!
keep up the good work and UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE xD
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keep up the good work and UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE xD
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