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HINEYMOON!!! That is so funny!! I laughed so hard, that my dad wanted to know what I was watching so he could watch it to! Oh dad...if you only knew.

too lazy to log in.
Yea update! Cookies for everyone!
sooooooo funny. update asap
XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD

I love this story
how you come up with this stuff??
you are amazing
thank you and update soon!!!!!

still to lazy to log in... awsome chapter... add me to the contact list

hpalex13@comcas.net

have you thought about making fanart of all of the itasai smexxx?

It's going great!! However, I had to snicker on one of your typos, if it isn't a typo, then it was hilarious as hell.

'Looks like the hineymoon is over.' Naruto flopped down into a chair, "Hey Baa-chan."

sorry, hiney... /snicker... so perfect... hehehe
Otherwise it was very good :D

I always knew that Naruto was blunt... And I need to remember to be caught up on the manga chapters before reading your updates! ^^ Tis a good way for me to remember!

I saw two or three spelling mistakes, mainly "honeymoon" as "hineymoon" which makes me giggle, and I think you misspelled "drool" to "deool" on the very last line. I think there was another in there somewhere but I couldn't find it again. Overall, a very cute chapter! I can't wait to see more of Naruto's moodiness and how Sasuke deals with it, if you write it!

naru/sasu squishiness eliminated? awwww! While the chapter was great, now my interest is piqued for the mentioned squishiness...

Absolutly WONDERFUL!!!!! (though Naruto growing a >.>birth canal<.< is slightly disturbing O.Ohehe) Other than that another great chapter!!!! Can't wait for the next one!!!!
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You never seem to stop astounding my poor brain...

HAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA, Naruto has to give live birth! *giggles madly as entire library looks on*

And seriously, I might have to do a Ita/Sai pick just for you one day.

Ja!

When Tsunade said that those hospital gowns were for easy access. I thought for sure that as soon as she left that a smut scene would ensue... I was sadly disappointed though *cries in her corner* . OH WELL! I guess I can live without smut for a little bit seeing as there's so much *there's never enough*. I got to stop reading/watching/looking at smut for some time *ARE YOU INSANE! You are insane aren't you?!* (No, I'm not insane...at least I don't think so o.O).

I wonder when the birth is going to come. I can't wait to see what the problems your going to cause, something tells me that your not nearly done with this fic are you? Oh well. Can't wait for your next update!