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for Why Orange?

by NinjaToadsAteMyBaby

person Xenobia
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*snickers* Boobies and a birth canal, huh? Just wait until the stretch marks...that'll make Naru-chan bitchy!!

I wonder what the shinobi equivilant of pickles and ice cream is?

*wanders off looking for another fudge pop*

Cuddles,
-X-
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story and i'm so glad you updated. I loved how Naruto got all pissed off it was so funny laughed! Can't wait for you next update
person Keyblyder
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOLY MOTHER OF------(claps hand over mouth before saying bad word) Your fic is absolutly amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love how they(Sasuke and Naruto) grow together over time!!!!!!!!!! I wish I could say more but i think that i am to dumbfounded to make a cohernt comment..... Do you email people when you update... cause if you do i would really appreciate it if yo could put me in that list. If not i will just have to check the site at a regular intervel(like......... every FIVE minutes!!!!)
Thanks for writing a wonderful story!!!!!
person Saiou-chan
schedule April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapie, more coming anytime soon? I know you have it.
schedule April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So i've been a dedicated reader for some time, and i realized i had never reviewed so here it goes. This is an awesome story i'm really glad i found it and keep up the good work! and can't wait for your next update
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! The lemon was good and I liked kiba and hinata seeing off neji and gaara. ^_^

On another note, I really appreciate your comment on the VT shooters family. Starting my own family soon (son is due in july) I can't help thinking about how his family must have felt. Their grief, betrayal, whether or not they understood what happened, and how they must feel they did something wrong. Its very sad to think someone you love could be capable of such an act of violence. And I pray they will have the strength to recover along with the VT students and staff who were affected.
person Mino
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chappie, lol I liked the nickname Sandman for
Gaara, very funny.I agree with you wholeheartedly about the
shooting, althugh I am not a cancer or a libra (Virgo >.< woot)
till next time
*throws you magic cookie*
-Mino-
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OK i'm going to be covering the reviews from the coming home chapter to the newest one. I just have to say lovin the story line so far really funny. Naruto with breasts *holds in chuckle* itachi a new born giraf *snorts trying to keep laughter at bay* Can men pms *falls over laughing butt off. LIke i said i found it very good. Keep up the good work and please keep me posted when you update. Just one question i thought all the sasu/naru slash girls were effected by a jutsu why would they beat the guy up. Oh well review next update.
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha! I laughed my butt off at this! I swear I almost fell out of my chair at some parts. The'Weapon of Ass Destruction' thing was so funny. XD Of course, sad and fluffy parts made me go 'aww' while some parts made me wanna punch something. >_< The little sessions between you, Sai, and Itachi are really funny, too. -reads one of them- Hehehe...Twizzler...XD Anyways! 0_0; This is really good! I hope you make more! I would be crushed if you didn't. Bye! -dances out of room-
person Anon
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok thanks. that was a good chapter...ok it was great, awsome what ever. [only likes: itanaru, itasasu, and sasunaru and no other pairings] the lemon was great too. but please put a warning for me when any pairings other then sasunaru are going to go at it. thank you! well cant wait for the next chapter. later!