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for Why Orange?

by NinjaToadsAteMyBaby

person pia
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it, but I stll can't get over the fact you put Temari and Lee together instead of her and Shikamaru. They, like, belong together. But otherwise, another chapter well done. Keep 'em comin', T.W.
person jewel
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the chapter, especially the part where Kiba says to be afraid of Hinata. I understand what you meant about the guy's poor family. I'm a Pisces so we also tend to see all sides.
person Damp
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Takes a moment for the Families, victims, friends,the people who passed away, Seung-Hui Cho(yes him too), and who-ever else was involved in a good way or bad way in the Virginia Tech shooting...*

Okay, let's continue with this reveiw.

There wasn't enough sex -_-. That's my only complaint, but I'm smex obssessed, there never seems to be enough smex...or at least I can never be fully satated. -_-

What's wrong with being a Libra? I'm a Libra -_-

Please update, very soon...
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter! There were a few spelling mistakes, but generally just the ones people make by being one key off. Other than that, I think it's all good ^^
person Xenobia
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey chickie!!! Totally understand the school/work thing. I'm walking the stage on May 12...and the profs are ticking me off! Papers, exams and a project...oh my!

I told you...just add hot water to a lemon and bam! Instant yaoi girl Heaven! But...where the heck was the lube? Water alone just isn't enough when you "play" in the water-not slick enough. How the heck do I know this? *coughs*

I plead the Fifth...

Update when you can sugs...maybe we can colab a piece when the dust settles for the both of us.

Love, snuggles and NaruSasu scented shampoo,
-X-
person Lici
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Virginia Tech might have been bad, and not everything is going to be okay, but thanks for thinking of another school. I'm just upset that VT's student body had to have something so tragic happen to begin with. I hope the boy who did it tries to understand his own judgement even if he isn't alive.

ANYWAY, Wonderful chapter...Short lemon, but hell, we got one! w00+! I'm about ready to start another chapter for my story...(which keeps adding chapters to itself WITHOUT informing me) Hopefully this will inspire me...*GRIN! >_<* Good luck on the nest chapter and fun times in college (though exams are the worst thing right now...GAH!)

Till later, then.

Ja ne!
person pia
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The wedding was absolutely beautiful. Maybe I'm a little too into this stuff, but I almost started crying when I read their vows. SasuNaru is my absolute favorite pairing. They are just too perfect for each other. I loved it. Please don't end the fic here. I know it has to come to an end one day, but this fic has grown on me. I always look forward to your updates. I can't wait for the next chapter.
person Onawa
schedule April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to drop you a line thanking you for the hint of a good anime - I have been really enjoying Kyo Kara Maoh! What a cute show! Thanks!!!
person Tabberwok
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
five days?! *dies* im a yaoi fanboy D: I love you :D! *kisses and such*
person andrea19
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey keep going! I havent seen you update in ages... please do! anyways
ja!