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by NinjaToadsAteMyBaby

schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG
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OMFG!!!

FINALLY!!!!
i love you, this is by far my favorite-est story ever!!!!

i have been waiting for this for so long...im ashamed to say that i almost lost hope...
but you gave it back to me...

ARIGATO-GOZAIMASU

this was incredible...perfect

*CHIBI Sango kneels and worships TrulyWicked*
person Naiika
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
FRUITS BASKET!!! Love the pet names! Congrats on finishing the story!
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
damn... its over.... Ive been reading this for what almost 2 years now? And I cant c it being over... but it is and it was done wonderfully. The way it ended left me wanting more and yet content in knowing it was all over. U know ur the only writer whos authors notes Ive loved as much as the story lol :P u have my eternal love *bows down b4 TW* Well its the end of the run and the only thing else I can think to say is... WOW! .... just wow....
person TheSimi
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke is really tense with Kana around. I can understand why and that it’s most likely subconscious on his part but still, he of all people should know better after everything that Naruto has told him about his own childhood.

I think Kakashi made a mistake when he sent Iruka upstairs while he talked to Obito. That action isn’t gonna do anything to ease Iruka’s fears, he probably thinks that Kakashi wants him out of the way. I can’t believe that Kakashi is so clueless that he doesn’t see how uncomfortable Iruka is…oooh this is going to spell trouble for this couple.

I’m really happy that there are no romantic feelings left between Obito and Kakashi but I hope that Kakashi will be quick to let Iruka know that too. What does Obito mean by "disposable fucktoy"? Did someone among the Uchiha clan abuse him? If that's the case then I say Go Itachi!!!

What will Kana think of Naruto training with Hinata?

Thank you for this chapter and I’ll jump right in and read the next one!
person TheSimi
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh did Hinata think that Kana was Orochimaru? She must know that the snake-bastard is dead and cut to tiny little pieces…Maybe she just panicked. Hinata is so gentle and she accepted Kana with no harsh words after the first misunderstanding (I really like Hinata).

Ha ha ha Naruto asking Kana what’s so interesting about the bushes when she’s trying to be sensitive and give him privacy while he binds his breasts….There is only one Naruto.

Anko is great, first totally pissed and then wanting to teach Kana. Anko and Kana…a scary combination but I do believe that Anko can really understand Kana, they think alike.

WOW Sai and Obito!!! I did not see that coming but I’m happy for them. Also I’m glad that Sasuke and Naruto has made up, I don’t like it when Sasuke’s pride gets in the way, it’s good that Naruto can bring him down to earth with the rest of us mortals again.

Thank you for this chapter!
person TheSimi
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The return of Kyuubi…again, that furball is really amusing and he has some good points. The part about Naruto’s intelligence being that of a hamster before him is a little mean though. I think Naruto has Kana pegged spot on. I hope that Sasuke will warm up to her eventually but we all know how stubborn he can be so I’m not going to hold by breath.

Aww Kana is in love with Udon…cuuute! At first I thought it was Konohamaru but I smiled to myself when I realized that it was Udon that she fancied.

Sakura is pregnant , I’m happy for her and Chouji.

The fact that Sai is Obito’s lover were revealed(I loved all the others expression when they found out) and Kakashi and Iruka finally made up, that makes me so happy. Kakashi telling Iruka that he owned all of Kakashi’s heart had me squealing like the fangirl I am (though I try to deny it).

Thank you so much for a wonderful chapter!
person TheSimi
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You write the smexiness so well! It’s temperature of the sun hot! (just thought you should know). What makes this lovescene extra good is that you show so clearly that the people involved love and want each other very much, plus they say that make up sex is always the hottest.

Ooooooh the drama, fucking Mizuki trying to hurt the babies…thank goodness Kana was there but I’m sad that she got hurt. Oh Will Kaji have the ability to summon snakes too now that Kana’s blood mixed with his, I mean Sasuke can already do it so it wouldn’t be too far a leap to think that maybe Kaji can too now…(okay I can feel myself rambling but I hope you understand what I mean).

I’m glad that Mizuki is dead but what’s wrong with Arashi?????? (bites nervously on thumbnail again, there’s hardly any nail left now *sniffles*).

I can’t believe how amazing you are, with every chapter this story is just getting better and better. Thank you so much!
person TheSimi
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kakashi I feel for him. Feeding and changing triplets are no easy task (I know since my brother has triplets) and here there are four babies…It was about time he remembered Kage Bunshin no Jutsu, sometimes the easy way is the right way.

Naruto has his own sets of problems, getting back in shape and learning to fight with breasts in the way. I can’t help but wonder what the others have done to deserve getting pranked and what kind of criteria Naruto uses when he decides on who should get pranked and who should not…Will this trait be passed down to the kids or will they be stoic Uchiha’s the lot of them?

About the occupied shower…I’m not sure they will fight when there is so many nice things you can do when you are two in a shower, after all sharing is caring :)

Thank you so much for a wonderful chapter!
person TheSimi
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay I was wrong…There was going to be a fight about the shower but at least it turned into lust so I wasn’t completely deadly massively wrong… right…right? (Dammit agree with me so that I can have peace of mind!) A celibate Uchiha must be a sad thing, especially with a blond temptation so close by…

Wow Iruka has quite a temper, if I were Kakashi I’d be afraid to open my mouth with all the threats of being gelded…Of course in Iruka’s defense I have to say that most of the things coming out of Kakashi’s mouth are crude and obnoxious. Iruka and Kakashi were nice to offer to babysit so that our new parents could have some alone time together.

Hotness ensues and Naruto’s going to top…You ARE eeeeeeeeevil to end the chapter there… Now I must hurry and read the next one!
person TheSimi
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hot hot hot hot hot hot!!! (OMG I think I’m choking on my tongue here…)

This chapter was hot and romantic at the same time. Sasuke and Naruto got reacquainted with each other’s bodies and I think Naruto did a damn fine job of topping, Sasuke certainly didn’t seem to have any complaints.

Ooooh what a cliffie!!! Obito’s alive? What will that mean for Iruka and Kakashi? Who is the girl, is it Rin or (GASP) Kushina?

Thank you so much for this chapter!