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for Why Orange?

by NinjaToadsAteMyBaby

person Xesta
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG. Do you update everyday? 8D 8D 8D I just read this fic yesterday and now you have me drooling for more! D:
person Mino
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay great chappie *hides mouth while snickering about Itachi*
>>; sorry t'was too funny Itachi-kun
nyaa you like Kyou Kara Maoh too, I got the first 3 dvds'
Wolfram is awesome (think I spelt it right) >>;
keep up the good work, oh oh and I loved the vows, very romantic <3
Sincerely,
Mino
person LFO
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I can't get my daily SasuNaru fix for FIVE DAYS!? UUUUUURRRRAAAARRRRRRGGHH!!!

Aaaaaanyways, the reception chapter was so short and boring. Since the wedding chapter was the same way, you could have made it up by putting a lemon scene. I WAS LOOKING FORWARD TO THAT!!!
person Anon
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
what?! 5 days?! why?! well i'm with itachi. itachi is not a bad dancer! hes actually pretty good. i know this cause i met him before the murder and dance at his parents party. XP he looked sooo hot that day.*slight nosebleed and drool* well i also agree with itachi for ending the chapter there. its a good ending for it and not a real big cliffy. sorry have to be honest. well see ya in 5 days. o and i'm getting surgery tomorrow so if you can pray to kami-sama that nothing goes wrong. thx. bye! o wait and about that email i sent you....please!!!!! *puppy eyes*
person Xenobia
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How sweet...I loved this. Sorry about your wedding planner troubles. I have to admit that when I planned my wedding, I got so frustrated that I told my sweetie that I was blazing for Vegas to get married and that he was more than welcome to join me. The vows were perfect...fabulous job.

Smoochies, snuggles and SasuNaru wedding cake topper,
-X-
person LFO
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I can tell that you spent a lot of time on the vows. Attack of the SasuNaru fangirls, lol. Keep up the good work!
person Anon
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i loved your vows. but i will admit that it sounded like someone runing away and writing a letter of there feelings. but i loved then all the same. i almost cried. oh and umm..whats his name again...Juugo? i agree with you it does sound like hes wondering which its tastier. oh and i know you'll think i'm stupid (but no one will tell me) what does tou-san, phallus, prostate, and entrails mean?! i have the general idea of prostate but still an acual definition would be good. *bows head* thank you. oh and i said i'd review like crazy didn't i?! well here goes.... NARUTO IS PREGNAT?!?! sasuke proposed?! and they're married now?! thats AWSOME!!!! and i love the fact that kuuybi was keeping it secret! but how could they not tell that it was morning sickness? i did. oh and garras jelous! thats even better! but don't get me wrong i still feel for him though its just that seeing a jelous gaara over naruto and the ability of having a child is just funny to me. well can't wait for the next chapter. good luck with the weddings, test, school, and your job! l8r!
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww... cool wedding... hehehe
person mary
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
UGH..........THE GOOD PART!!!!!!! please update soon!! love ya!
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww *sniffles* that was so sweet. The last 2 chaps were so good. I'm so glad that they are wedded and happy and all that good stuff. This whole baby thing is gonna add a whole other dimension to it i'm sure. Good job.