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for Why Orange?

by NinjaToadsAteMyBaby

schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my I love you so much. Never have I seen someone with a love for these stories update as much as you. I love u so much you r wonderful.^_^*
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No problem. I'm glad my info was helpful. I checked my kanji dictionary twice to be sure before I said anything. Oh, and you're totally right. A beautiful wedding can be pulled off in a week. My sister did it. Her fiance had to go to Iraq so, they put together a stunning wedding in just a week. Most wedding preparations take so long because people are so indecisive about what they want, or want so much that they can't fit it all into one week of planning.

awwe, those vows were soooo sweet. ^__________^ Can't wait for the next chapter
person emp78
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL. Kakashi literally tied up writing invitations; Sasuke threatening to feed someone's entrails to them. My thoughts on chaps. 347 & 348? Masashi Kishimoto ROCKS!!
person Saiou-chan
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, another chapie, and thankyou for giving me that link, I'm so happy now I can read all that stuff. I love you!
person Xenobia
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I so loved the proposal...better than what I got; not that I'm complaining much. MY sweetie and I were at a BBQ cook-off competition seven years ago (this week!) and he proposed in the middle of our tent. He was swaying slightly as he has been up most of the night, watching the pit and drinking Wild Turkey...he was still drunk when he proposed!!! *laughs*

*sigh*I do love weddings, don't you? Plus, with Naruto in a family way, it seems to make it all the sweeter. Keep it up, sugs. I love ya more for it!!

Hugs, snuggles and a huge plate of Texas Brisket and Ribs,
-X-
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww bless - that was a really swwet chapter :d heh - Sasuke-teme's making Naruto happy ^_^ that makes me want to hug him, I love seeing Naruto happy :D

Hina xXxx
person Damp
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a list of things I'm IFY about in the whole chapter...it's constructive critisism, not flaming okay...and If you think I'm just out right flaming then please forgive.

1) If my boyfriend were to ever propose to me and said something similar to that I would say "HELL YES!" and glomp him...then after that I'd smack him in the head and tell him to make a better and an ass load less cheesy of a proposal to me. And make him say it to make again after we had sex. Then I'd make him buy me some chocolate XD.

2) A WEEK?!! A FUCKING WEEK!! Girl, are you insane! It's took my friend 2 YEARS! and even then the wedding was still chaotic!

Now here is my list of props to you

1) I WANT THAT RING! >.< HOW MUCH FOR THAT RING! I LOVE THAT RING!

2)I like that you made Sasuke propse to Naruto in that very pretty enviorment. ^^ So nice.

3)HURRAY FOR THE THREATS!! GO SASUKE!! ^^ We can always count on Sasuke's threats to make things go so much faster.

Okay I'm done ._. Now, where is my invitaion for Naruto and Sasukes' wedding?
person LFO
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. And I was upset cause I couldn't get my daily NaruSasu fix for two days! TWO DAYS!!!!!

Yes, Juugo was very, very, VERY disturbing. When he was having his little thinking out loud session, I was thinking that he was comparing Guys and Girls by 1. the quality of sex, and 2. how good they tasted. But yea, disturbing.
person Onawa
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! So Sweet!
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Because 'akatsuki' is a whole seperate word. It's not written with the characters for 'aka' or 'tsuki'. It's written with it's own kanji. It can't translate into 'red moon' at all.

Good chapter^-^ I can't wait for the wedding.