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for Why Orange?

by NinjaToadsAteMyBaby

person dory
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awsome story
person Teania
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that last chapter was pretty cool but it was alittle fast. But i liked it anyways, what's Kyuubi up to? hehe I can't wait to find out and because i need fanfics to survive...Please update soon! *smiles*
person mary
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
let me take a guess.......kyuubi is got something outragous planned for naruto?!?! heheheeheh love the story...can't wait til next chapter!
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so now the mpreg will begin.
person Onawa
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think I know what Kyuubi is up to....is this where the Mpreg comes in? Missed you - glad you are back!
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really like the story so far. I'm a bit hesitant about the mpreg, but keep with the way you're going and I'll suffer through. Itachi and Sai alone would make it worth my while.
However, although I love your story there's one thing I wanted to comment on.
Naruto's got an IMMENSE amount of chakra on his own. Granted, it took a while for him to learn to use it, but I think it would take a lot more than just regular sparring to to use it up. True, he's fighting Sasuke, but they're not fighting to kill...I dunno. Maybe I'm just being extremely picky. I just don't like Naruto coming across as too weak I guess. Ignore me.
I like your story anyway.
~The Flame Reviews~
P.S. Itachi I love you! Sai can I have him for a day? Heck, can I have both of you for a day? I know of a wonderful place that has kingsized beds,ceiling mirrors,excellent room service, and a large personal hottub. I would love to learn knot tying from you- I even have some excellent rope you could...demonstrate with. If you'd like, I could also show you some wonderful things with peacock feathers and Pixie Stix. Think about it yeah?
person Briryan
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Can't wait to read the reaction of Sasuke and Naruto when they find out what Kyuubi did to Naruto. Looking forward to the next chapter.
person Damp
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Time for Naruto to get pregnant! I can't wait for ihs reaction XD! I'm sure you'll make it histerical! And I'm also pretty sure a Naruto with fox ears and a tail is very cute ^^
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok all i have to say is about darn time. gosh man. ok now that im done that this was a good chapter, finally naru-kun gets some respect, damn villagers. i luv sasuke, wont take shit from no one nice. and kyuubi is up to sumthin sneaky, wonder wat that could be...anyway update soon so i can find out wat happens next XD
person Shinigami24
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*LOL* I rememeber that picutre TW! Since it was on Shrocomemos's lj site. Took me by surprise. But Sai's not my type so don't kill me Itachi! I think Naruto was either jealous or disguisted. Not certain, but his expression was priceless! Sakura got a nosebleed. Kakashi was sweatdropping.