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for Why Orange?

by NinjaToadsAteMyBaby

person mary
schedule March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
do i dare think of what is coming next?.........hehehehehehehe........i just hope there is a BIG surprise coming!! love your story please keep going!
person lici
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yosh! You have updated! Thanks for telling me about the new chapter.
person Saiou-chan
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapie, next one coming soon? Hmm Kyuubi's Chakra flared? Something tells me that old fox is up to something.
person heather
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
soooooooo cooooooool
person Saiou-chan
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL! Poor guys, "fun" for a week, well, they can devolp the relationship in other ways, and make up for lost time later.
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohh the last part was sooooooo funny ahahaha!!! like getting caught while kissing?! hahaha

enywei... good job.. kip it up (^^,
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke poured his essence into Naruto not even noticing that Kyuubi's chakra flared momentarily.




Is that a hint ? I am reading as fast as I can as you post . Love the fic please give me more.
person Xenobia
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice...good job. The chakra flare from Kyu-something is going to happen in say...nine months?

Huggles and SasuNaru marshmallows in the cocoa,
-X-
person Damp
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Naruto's pregnant isn't he? I bet he is...you did say that the M-preg was going to happen in the 27 chapter no??So does this mean that in the next next chapter Naruto's going to have a baby??
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
believe me i know how hard it is to write lemons (just wrote one last night for my fic) so yea. it was good though (i think i need a cold shower) but yea XD that was a cute scene with them together. can't wait for the next chappie.