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March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaaaay! An emotional side to Sasuke, he needed that wake up call, they all did. Sasuke need it so he'd remember Naturto's mortal, tresure him, and the village, as you said, needed it to realise, he is the holder of Kyuubi, not Kyuubi himself. Nice job, looking forwerd to more. ^^ (Ooooo I love this new keyboard ^.^)
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March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very very very very very very very very very very GOOD!!!! keep going!
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March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've been keeping up with this story and i love it. One suggestion i have to make could you maybe use a key at the beggining or after the chapter so we know what the english defenition is of the jutsu's. Other than that its a great story.
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March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww yay, Naruto is back with us. Good. I was scared there for a moment till you told me there were like over 40 chps. lol. Can't wait for the next update.
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March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT, NOW HURRY UP I WANT MORE!!!!!
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March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
S**t woman, you had me scared...but you're right, it was necessary for Naruto to almost die. Now, the villagers need to bow down and kiss Baruto's a$$ for treating him as bad as they did.
*giggle*I love the fact that Sakura is with Choji...is cute.
Hugs, watermelon and lemon body shots,
-X-
PS->Works getting alot better now that I've shown them that I have mad skills...>:-}
*giggle*I love the fact that Sakura is with Choji...is cute.
Hugs, watermelon and lemon body shots,
-X-
PS->Works getting alot better now that I've shown them that I have mad skills...>:-}
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March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story [ha i wonder how many times you've heard that] Anyways i was spazzing when i thought Naruto was gonna die God i almost cried. I'm such a sap, but about you. You have a fucken amazing talent, and your fine at fight scenes. Keep up the freaken fabulous work
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March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sakura and CHOJI??!!! No that is a couple I've never seen before. I think that I like it. Thanks for not killing Naruto. I've had a really sucky day and this would not have helped. I like the fact that Sasuke isn't afraid to let Naruto know how much he cares.
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March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Noooooooo! :) But good luck on the job anyway... Can't wait for the battle! :)
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March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Shizune and Shikamaru??? Now that's entertainment!! Good choice of totally of road pairing... *gleams happily*