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March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Judging by your conversation with Sai and Itachi, don't think he is dead... yet. Hope you update soon!!!
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March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You write good fight scenes I don't see why you said you suck at them, you should have more faith in yourself. Can't wait for the next chapter ^_^!!!!
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March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!?!?
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March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.O OMG! Your fight scene was okay. You described what each did without overmuch detail which, in my opinion, kept the story clean and flowing. but letting the kyuubi-boy die, even temporarily, T.T !! Update, update, update!
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March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I AGREE WITH ITACHI AND SAI SADISTIC SADISTIC SADISTIC! PLEASE LET NARUTO BE OK! I DON'T KNOW WHAT I'LL DO IF HE DIES! and this chapter was actually very good. I suck at fight scenes too.
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March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NOOOO! Naruto can't die! There's still so much stuff that has to happen...right?? Anyway, you left us with our hearts in our throats. update soon.
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March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok first of all how dare u injure our blond hair ninja. ok im done. i think you did a good job at your first attempt to writng a fight scene. i could follow it easily so it was ok. it was a good chapter (except my blond hair ninja got injured) but overall i liked it and wished u didnt leave an evil cliffy again. u r mean in a good way XD
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March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
noooo you cant kill naruto the story needs to go on
anyway i think you did a good job with this chapter but
it needs some editing.
i love this story and you should keep going ^-^
anyway i think you did a good job with this chapter but
it needs some editing.
i love this story and you should keep going ^-^
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March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the battle scene wasn't as bad as u thought... it was good... and about naruto... hmmm... i wonder what will happen.. cant wait for tomorrow! ahahaha (^^,
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March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love you!
When you update could you kind enough to email me?
kiki_yaoi@yahoo.com
Much thanks! *Cookies*
And your slash isn't bad. Go to narutofic.org and look up JBDragon and Madame Mere....they aren't half bad and you might get some fantastic ideas from them. I did!
When you update could you kind enough to email me?
kiki_yaoi@yahoo.com
Much thanks! *Cookies*
And your slash isn't bad. Go to narutofic.org and look up JBDragon and Madame Mere....they aren't half bad and you might get some fantastic ideas from them. I did!