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Take THAT stalking fan girls! On second thought tho, those types of images might increase the stalkings...Poor NaruSasu - no hope for private fresh air lovin'!

ohh, ive been reading ur story since the 1st chappie was released... i like the way u write ur story and the little thingy before and after the chapter.. hehe it was like telling 2 stories in one... kkkkkkkkkkewwwwwl hehehe... enywei... good job! (^^,

Me again. Thanks for commenting on my post. This one was really good. By the way, the last partis grammatically incorrect.

ItaSai...Eeewwww...Sai already creeps me out. He's TOO blatantly Gay. It's really wrong. I mean, he wears (what looks like) skin-tight leather ALL THE TIME! And I just hate Itachi. He's just an ass. A giant walking ass.

Anyways, I kinda have an idea for a possible NaruGaa FF...SPOILERS: So remember how Gaara died, and all? And then he came back to life from Chiyo-baa-chan (Chiyo-baa-chan is the BOMB! I <3 Chiyo-baa-chan! Old grannys that PWN rock!), right? Well, when Naruto left Suna and Gaara motioned for a handshake but Naruto was nervous so Gaara used the sand to move his hand a little bit? There was obvious attraction right there (cause Naruto is definitely Gay in the series). Why not build on that? Ignore what happened after that, and work on the storyline from there. How about Naruto has to leave Konoha for a place that is safe for him that Akatsuki would never suspect him to go to; like Surda (They don't need to go to Surda, they already have the one-tail).

Yea, and sorry for double-posting. I forgot to mention that if Kiba and Hinata are dating, how can she talk normally? She could barely get past a sentence with Naruto, and that was only talking. But DATING!? She'd faint from embarrassment, let alone speak!

That was a fast update, but a lousy place to leave it! When is Sasuke going to wake up?

This is a really fun story. I like how you have them together almost immediately, and make Sasuke work for it. But what I wanna know is where are you getting the new chapters of Naruto? *sniffles* I can't seem to find them anywhere.

Keep up the good work!

a/j

WEEEEEEEE! I love Skee-ball and I am so happy that Naruto continues to think of others before himeself.

Ummm...western breakfast. But, you shoulda made flap jacks too! Yum-o!

I loved this chappie...keep it up, luv.

Snuggles...-X-

PS...for the reviewer who wanted to know what "Usuratonkachi" meant; it loosely translates to "Moron". It's meant as nice tease rather than an ugly one.

this is a very good story
i enjoy reading it.

"T.W.Hey! Jerk. Okay there's something that's been bugging me for a while. Orochimaru is self-proclaimedly weaker than Itachi, right?possible spoilers ahead. Well do you all remember when Naruto and Jiraya went looking for Tsunade? Weren't Itachi and Kisame rather relunctant to take Jiraya on? I mean they even ran away when Jiraya showed up. Does that mean that Jiraya is actually stronger than Orochimaru? That's just been in the back of my head for a while now."

On Itachi leaving Jiraiya's presence: I wondered about that too. However; the best predators don't risk injuring themselves unless they're guranteed sucess, even in nature. It is not about cowardice or strength, but picking your battles.

omg i enjoyed reading each chapter. they were so cute, disturbing and downright hilarious. i agree with itachi an impotent sasuke would be funny to see, but dont tell him i ssaid that. cant wait to read more and that last scene in chapter 13 was so cute. XD