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Ahaha! I was actually like Itachi when Tsunade told them the side effects. Naruto's soooo nice! I just love that little blond. please continue the story.

Very nice. I really like how you are focusing on the story instead of sex. It makes it all the more interesting. Also, have you ever thought of a GaaraxNaruto pairing? In my opinion, they are a bit more suited for each other and would be closer to the actual storyline (since Sasuke didn't come back; yes, I know that this fanfic is set in the future)

SPOILERS: Yes, Itachi and Kisame were reluctant to fight Jiraiya because they needed their strength for the task they were assigned: capturing Naruto. So no, Jiraiya can't be stronger than Itachi and Kisame. Also, they didn't want that much attention (would have led to more fighting).

I love the story. its very cute n respectful. sasunaru is the best! itachi laughing is very scary and disturbing. Sry 2 itachi 4 that comment.

AWWWWWWW!!!!!dat was sweet!! ^-^ heh i luv it hope 2 c an update
later on. keep goin' ur doin' great. Ja AoiKitsune =^-^=

Aww, that was so nice of Naruto, you had him do something my friends Tammy and Dawn like to do, I never did because I don't like playing arcade games much.

Awww you WERE evil to Sasuke here! Oh well, i'm sure the problem with right itself in time lol. Of course Tsunade would get a kick out of that. That was real sweet there at the end, Naruto giving that kid the tickets. Sounds like something he would do. Good job.

Yay! another chapter!!! I am glad you are keeping the outfit the same. Such a sweet chapter!

i think u should leave it as is. Hop to c an update soon.
Ja Ne =^-^=

I really am enjoying your story so far. I have a couple of suggestions - you asked in a previous chapter about the lemon... It was ok, really, but I would have loved to see a bit more (Pardon my spelling) sensuousness. A bit more of the characters luxuriating in the sensations. Maybe a bit more "squishiness" and foreplay.

I really like the idea of Iruka being a secret Anbu. It is nice to see an Iruka that is soft with a strong core.

Also, while this is a great break from many of the angst filled stories that abound here on AFF, perhaps a bit more angst regarding the attempted rape of young Naruto. It seemed that his friends had a harder time with it than Naruto did. Maybe I just missed something about his reaction. If so just ignore this comment.

Also, Thanks for updating so quickly!

I really like the story so far! Cant wait for the next chapter!