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AWESOME chapter.... I just LOVE the children, they are just so adorable.... ^_^

great chapter i laughed when they had to teach the kids potty training.

OMFG!!! Your story is freakin awesome. Normally I dont care for mega multi chap fics, but yours is the execption(sp?)(yah i know i cant spell worth a damn). It took me like 4-5 hours to read the whole thing from start to current chap(with a few potty breaks in between, like you really need to know that o__O). I like your A/N's with Itachi, Sai, and Kyu. Your two muses kick ass too. Is the story done or is there more?

Chapter 53: (Lotsa birthdays happening around now.) Happy Birthday. ♥ . . . . Kek-kek-kek, this dialogue is funny. ^^ “Killing joy is in my genetic structure.” . . . . Hahaha, gotcha there, Itachi! ^^ . . . . Awesome, thanks for the key. The complexity sounds fun. ^_^ . . . . NO!! You are NOT the only one!! I remembered that part too!! O.O . . . . The Hachibi’s jinchuuriki is rather interesting-looking. And I like the way he talks too.

Uh-oh, fever. Hey, did Naruto call Iruka “tou-san” before now? I can’t remember. . . . Pssh. Where else? He’s getting a nurse.
See? (*smirks*) . . . . Yeesh, that went up fast. . . . Heh. “accept the ‘thank you’ since it’s such a rare thing to hear from an Uchiha’s lips.” Totally. . . . Nice insight on Naruto’s part when he says, “I don’t want to end up treating her differently than the others because I’m worried she’ll get sick.” . . . . ô.o Huh. I never would’ve guessed that Naruto would know that definition before Sasuke does. . . . (*snort*) This is getting funnier by the moment. First that definition, then Sasuke’s laughter, then Naruto’s name being “one ‘maki’ away from a fishcake,” then Naruto’s warning reaction . . . and finally, Naruto’s threat; he’s been taking cues from Iruka’s behavior with Kakashi, hasn’t he? ^^
Kakashiiiiiiii . . . I’m telling Iruka, damn you. D= . . . . (*grumbles quietly*) ((((Dumb kids.)))) . . . . (!) Uh-oh. “I’ve already told them that the walls are not for drawing on and to listen to you from now on.” That last part scares me; Kakashi’s clever, he might turn that around to his advantage one of these days. õ_o;
Love Sasuke’s immediate mild doubts. . . . I also love how peaceful and relaxed these two are when they talk and cuddle with each other. They’re so content with each other. It’s sweet. ♥ . . . . Oh, GROSS! x_x . . . . Ooh, love it when he said, “Now we know not to mess up the walls, don’t we?” That shriek from the bathroom—what was it, exactly? . . . . Aww, that’s cute how Iruka and Kakashi fell asleep with the kids. . . . Boy, Naruto’s not lax on discipline, is he? I think I like that. =)
Oh Gawd, I’m gonna hate this scene, aren’t I? (*shields eyes warily*) . . . . “[. . .] so thoroughly and efficiently was not something he’d have expected from his usuratonkachi.” It actually fits pretty well. He can probably do it better than Sasuke, lol. . . . . Heh. I wonder if it’s fifty-total or fifty per kid. If that’s the case, eeeyikes. ^_^;;;
Thanks for not walking me through the details. . . . LOL, clever how Naruto figured out a solution!! He gets them from the randomest things!! If he’s training, it’s from something more mundane, and if it’s other stuff, the solution’s from the training. ^_^
“[. . .] until he ran out of ammo.” XD . . . . And that is cute, when the kid gives the tip to tell Arashi. ^^
Aww, cute, Kakashi “pretending to be mortally wounded.” ♥ For some reason, it’s not that hard for me to picture that. =) . . . . Wow, Naruto’s busy. . . . (!!) Yikes, personality-switch! (Get in the car!) . . . . Heh. “Well that’s not good.” XD . . . . What, is that his stuffed toy or something? . . . Yup. . . . Man, this IS a personality-switch. That’s scary.
Wow. . . . Okay, call me a worry-wart, but this talk of more danger to come, and the fact that things are so happy now, gives me the paranoid feeling that either Sasuke or Naruto is going to get killed in this story. Please, please don’t let either of them die. ;__;

Lol, MADARA!! XDD

Gosh, I've been following for a long time and I don't think I ever reviewed it. But to let you know, it is one of my favs. I am especially enjoying the stories with the kids. You mentioned if there are any ideas for kids stories to throw 'em out to ya'. I think the terrible twos would be a great year. That's the year kids learn to bite. And if they're ninja kids, oh the possibilities. I can remember how my mom broke me of the habit: she bit me back one time and I never bit again.

that's what i love about you the story chapter as well as the author's note is always interesting. thanks for your hard work and on your birthday too that is showing real dedication. happy birthday to you and i can't wait until the next chapter.

YOU ROCK T.W.!!!!!!! I SO LOVE YOU!!

ahem......sorry i was just sooo happy to see this updated!!!!! i love the chapter!
as for childhood stories well...... my littlest is soon to be 3 and still in diapers(she refuses to use the toilet no matter what we try) and has a redded temper to boot! the rest (a total of 4 kidos) act like monkeys!! they climb anything and everything! i mean it! the oldest when he was 2 climbed a built in BOOKSHELF!! so, yeah i have war stories galore! ask if ya want more!!! glad to give you ammo!

laters! ~_^

omg, that was just so totally CUUUUTE!!! the baby talk was so priceless, i actually read it out loud to hear myself. LOL!

any idea how long this'll be? shooting for the kids ending up in anbu? ;-)

OH WOWOWOWOWWO!!!!!!! I'm SO HAPPY to see an update from you! I simply am in LOVE with this fic, so reading this continuation of Naruto, Sasuke, and their uber adorable kids had me squealing. I died and floated up to heaven......can't wait to read more from you. I do hope it will continue....*grovels and clings* Thank you so very much for updating this. I loved every moment of it! <3

Wow! things are going so well for the family! The toddlers are just SO CUTE!!!