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for Why Orange?

by NinjaToadsAteMyBaby

person Xenobia
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
See what I meant...*starts to sing under her breath*
"Jealous Uchihas and cute dobe whiskers"

*laughs*I love the fact that Sakura was so CALM about our boys dating...we will be nice to her, right?

Oh yeah, is it "The" Hyuuga? I thnik I know but I'll be patient.

Mucho Love,
-X-
person jewel
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the fact that Naruto isn't a complete moron to the consequences of his and Sasuke's relationship. Please don't have Sakura go completely psycho when she realizes that they're together. looking forward to the next chapter
person Xenobia
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmm...soft and fluffy; kinda like a Moon Pie.

I am so flattered that you enjoyed "My Yaoi-est Things"; you really did inspire it.

Love and Hugs to ya woman!!

Xenobia
person Lici (lazy login brat)
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh. I. LOVE. YOU! *glomps*

Please hurry and update! I wanna know, I wanna know!
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww cute chappie. And we got some action here. Very good *gives evil laugh* The progression here is on pace i think too. Normally i don't read through the whole way stories that have chapters that seem to be as short as this story's but considering the pacing of it, i think it's fine as it is. And from what you told me of the lentgh so far, it's kool. Can't wait to see what happens next. And ya damn skippy i didn't miss the Kyuubi insinuation!! Update soon.
person Saiou-chan
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUTTTTE! KAWAIIIII! ^^
person sadistickiss
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoa... *shiver*... love... smut... *faint*

Nice job! As usual *heart hearT*. I find it's really hard to imagine Naruto explaining that he's been "acting" all this time, a lot of authors make it sound overdramatic, or far too unreal, I thought you did a good job =].

Loooooveee!!!
person Hasana
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I know this doesn't have anything to do with your story, which I love by the way, but I know how you feel when you read chapter 343. I swear I am still on cloud nine. And your story just keeps getting better with every chapter! Keep up the good work!
person Xenobia
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG...I have never laughed so hard! Especially regarding the comment from Kyuubi not wanting to to heal Sasuke's love bites. The village is just going to have to accept that Naruto is no longer their whipping boy. I understand what motivates them to be hateful...but I don't have to like or accept it.

Thanks for brightening my day!

TTYS!

-X-
person nette
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
again good chapter. awww naruto has a mark from sasuke too cute i bet sasuke's proud of that blemish lol. and iruka/kakashi action is always a plus. can't wait to read more so update soon XD