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for Why Orange?

by NinjaToadsAteMyBaby

person Shadow2008
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this story ^_^ i hope you continue! BURN ALL THE VILLAGERS THE BISHES.... i would totally go postal on all their asses..... roar.
person Andi-chan
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I soooooooooooooooo love this story!!!!

(sorry for all the 'o's in "so"...
hehe!

I can't wait for the next chapter!!
Good luck! I'll be reading

-Ja!
person Anon
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! i feel so sorry for naruto. i think i'm gonna cry,then beat the villagers up for the way they treat him! but at least he as sasuke now. please hurry and write the next chapter. i wanna find out if Naruto's life gets better. he really does diserve a better life. ok now i'm gonna kill the villagers.*grabs kuni in hand* bye.
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwwww! that was a really cute chapter! i hope that sakura completly bashes the villagers and that sasuke gets his fox! great fic and can't wait for the next chapter!
person jewel
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"Usuratonkachi. I want you. I'm going to steal your heart and make you love me."
OK, absolutely LOVE that line!! Keep it up.
person VRon8899
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww...poor naru-chan! great chapter ^^ update soooooooooon!!!
person Anon
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww I like it. It's very sweet, but I feel bad for Naruto that every single bad thing that could happen to him does. I really liked the bit about how which head of Mt. Hokage he sits on depends on his mood. That's a cute thing for Sasuke to observe.
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was kinda sad... and kinda sweet, too. i look forward to the next chapter!
person Xenobia
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am sooo pissed...how can anyone treat Naruto like they do? I really hope that Sakura and Sasuke make the villagers pay for the way they treat Naruto.

So sad and yet, I find that I'm pissed. Sasuke is so cuddly right now...

Please contiue, I love it!

Xenobia
person bluewow
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really love this. It is PERFICT! A very sexy Naruto, a Sasuke that loves and wants to protect Naruto, and a Sakura that wants to get revenge for Naruto (PLEASE let her get sweet revenge XD).