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for Why Orange?

by NinjaToadsAteMyBaby

person VRon8899
schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gah! there must be more!! MOOOORRRREEEE!! please? ^_^
person ObsidianLace
schedule February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My first reaction was "OMG we get to get Naruto out of that horrid orange thing!" Yay! Go Sasuke.
I love that the nine tails is going to play a part in this one. Him telling Naruto to jump Sasuke was great.
person oraday
schedule February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I bet you're wondering how to put in Italics... Well you have to use HTML codes.Put at the end of the phrase you want to put in italiscs and put at the beginning of the phrase. For bold, you just need to change the 'i' to a 'b'. Um... those are the only HTML codes I know... But there are lots more, I'm sure.

Well, I hope that's of some use to you. Yatta! I finally have some time this weekend to actually read things rather than skim them so I'm going to be reading all the Why Orange updates and reviewing. I'm hoping to update too, but we'll have to see how ambitious I can be.

Oh, and it's awesome to have re-read this. It's a reminder of how it all started... Ah, Sasuke was so nice; still is. I just loved this chapter. Woot! I loved Naruto in his new outfits too^.^
person oraday
schedule February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Crap! You can't see the HTML codes. I'll try to describe them. > < okay, you use the less than sign, then you put an 'i', then you put a greater than sign so it's gonna be <> with an 'i' in the middle. You put that at the beginning of the phrase you want to italisize. For the end of the phrase, you use the same <>, with a /i in the middle... If you want to do bold, just use a 'b' instead of an 'i'. Okay, I hope this one shows up.
person Stacy
schedule February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wonder where I can buy boxers with the ramon bowl on them?? I can't remember if you said that this story is going to be a long one or not?! Anyway, I hope it is cus' I love it so far!
schedule February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is cute...I think I'll follow this piece also.

Xenobia
schedule February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i think this is going to be a great story! i love the reason you came up with for naruto wearing orange. it's kinda heartbreaking, but makes for great reading. keep up the great work!
person shinshin
schedule February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked the start! and I have one question that will get me to know do i continue reading this one, so, is naruto uke or seme? I know that sasunaru means sasuke on top, but sometimes it doesn't go like that.... ^__^ loved your writing style.
person Mar-chan
schedule February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great start. I've always hated how they treat Naruto. please continue this fic.
person kawaiicrimsonkitsune
schedule February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting... You have my attention now please update and doing very nice so far ^^