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for Why Orange?

by NinjaToadsAteMyBaby

person chineseartist
schedule February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh, that was cute. made me laugh. i'm looking forward to seeing Naruto in nice outfits, and i wonder what Sasuke's reaction to said clothes will be, hmm? this is gonna be good!
person VRon8899
schedule February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
haha! Cute I can't wait for more!!!
person animehead
schedule February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Second most likely scenario: he's gay but loves someone else, in which case I'll just seduce him into loving me. I laughed at this because it is so Sasuke. He's so cocky and proud...lol. I like the story so far. I hope to read more.
schedule February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was cute. I like it. Only advice i can think is...remember the basics. Write where your inspiration takes you, remember the age-ol conflict addition somewhere along the way, and enjoy it. If it moves you after you read it then chances are, we'll all like it too. Update soon!