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July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
::gasps:: OMG! An Update! WOOHOO! ::dances in desk chair::
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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have the feeling I've read this before, but...eh, that was probably a long time ago so I'm going to read it again~! I agree with Kyuubi though, the kid needs to get laid XD lmao
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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Kawaii no Jutsu, I love it XD lmao Since you mentioned it, and the site it is located on, I couldn't help but go over to mediaminer.org and check it out for myself. Brilliant. And yes, sibling rivalry is one of the most terrifying things out there XD lol
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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, now I'm really sure I've started reading this before ... Can't remember how far I got though XD lol Oh well, its always nice to reread great works, ne? *^.^*
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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonder what Sasuke is planning...actually, I'm wondering if I've read that chapter before more than anything XD lmao And since I just recently remembered my password and whatnot to log on, I'm wondering if I've actually reviewed this as an anon XD lol So much to contemplate *sigh* Oh well, next chapter *clicks*
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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the play on words you used for chapter 5's title XD lmao Playing with words is fun~! *^.^*
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June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WRITE MORE!!!!!! PLEASE?!!!!!! YOUR STORY IS THE AWESOMEST EVER IN THE WHOLE ENTIRE WORLD!!!!!!!! I WANT TO SEE HOW THIS ENDS........THERE IS AN END, RIGHT? OH WELL! I DONT CARE. WRIGHT MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OH YEAH, DID I SAY YOURE STORY WAS AWESOME AND THAT YOU SHOULD WRITE MORE? cuz you should do it! if you want. BYE!!!!!!!
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May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 52: (*looks at Ri and Danny*) . . . What have I walked in on? õ_ô . . . . (*snicker*) Love the “kitty” explanation. Cute. ♥ ^^ . . . . Wow, your mom proofreads them? O.O That’s . . . wow. I’d never get the nerve to show my mom any yaoi stories I read/write. . . . Hang on. Your dad and brother are okay with yaoi too. What’s this about the “mass coronary” then? Who’s left if you’ve just ruled out your mom, dad, and bro? õ_ô
(*snicker*) Love how Naruto “leaned down to look Arashi in the eye.” X3 . . . . (*gasp*lol*) “I’ll take that as a yes.” XD . . . . I just don’t get that raspberry thing people do with their kids. .__.; . . . . Oh, that’s so precious, seeing Sasuke like that. And I love what he said about them too. ♥ ♥
“Difficult as hell.” Yup. ^^ That’s what I love about him. ♥ . . . . (*pitches back, dies laughing*) “You’re . . . “you’re . . . “You’re kidding me?” XDDDDD What a thing to say!! . . . . Wow, kid knows to stay quiet at that age when Sasuke gives him The Look? That’s impressive. ô_ô . . . . Oh, cute touch. “It was one my father would give me when I misbehaved. Always worked.” So . . . how far back does Sasuke remember? . . . . “Heaven help.” Yup. Totally. ^^
“Ewo?” . . . “Ero?” Is that it? . . . . (*snort*) Smart girl, knowing the more complex meaning of “ero” I would’ve thought that if she picked it up, it would just be a way of identifying Jiraiya, not Kakashi as well. But it’s a funny idea. So we’ve got “up,” “no” and “ero.” What next?
O.O Jeezus, that was some mission! . . . . Yay, they’ve got Cheerios in the ninjaverse! ^_^ . . . . Wow, that’s a good one! “Smile?” Man. o_o
Interesting about Mikomi. Makes me curious. Are her legs weak, maybe?
Oh yeah, the pairings. (*sigh*) . . . . Man, that’s scary. Too many brats everywhere. @_@ . . . . So, what’s with the fascination with Cho? . . . . Iruka with the videocamera! That’s great! I love it! =D . . . . Eeek, the little critters are on the move! Run! O.O (One of the weird things about me: dolls and clowns don’t scare me. Babies and little kids do a lot.) . . . . “Going after what we want is a normal Uchiha trait.” Oh, brother. (*rolls eyes*) 9_9 What are you Uchihas, animals with pure instinct? (*shakes head, smiling quietly*) . . . . What’s “face-palmed?” I think I have an idea, but I’m not sure what the gesture looks like.
CHOCOLAAAAATE!!! =DDD . . . . Cute, but the kids are going to be sick later. (Too much chocolate for those little guys.) Oh yeah, and they’ll probably be hyper as hell. No, I don’t think Sasuke and Naruto are going to get any sleep tonight (or an “excuse” for no sleep either *wink*).
Wow, you’re an aunt? Cool! . . . . (*snort*) Nice way of putting it, Itachi. (“Spawned.” XD (No offense, TW, it just sounded funny. I would’ve laughed no matter who he would’ve been talking about. ^^;)) . . . . O.O That is one hell of a threat! O.O . . . . (*snicker*) “It was freaky.” I can imagine. XD;; . . . . You’re kidding me. Your bro’s first word was “perv”? . . . (*blinks*) . . . XDDD Did he know what it meant?
(*snicker*) Love how Naruto “leaned down to look Arashi in the eye.” X3 . . . . (*gasp*lol*) “I’ll take that as a yes.” XD . . . . I just don’t get that raspberry thing people do with their kids. .__.; . . . . Oh, that’s so precious, seeing Sasuke like that. And I love what he said about them too. ♥ ♥
“Difficult as hell.” Yup. ^^ That’s what I love about him. ♥ . . . . (*pitches back, dies laughing*) “You’re . . . “you’re . . . “You’re kidding me?” XDDDDD What a thing to say!! . . . . Wow, kid knows to stay quiet at that age when Sasuke gives him The Look? That’s impressive. ô_ô . . . . Oh, cute touch. “It was one my father would give me when I misbehaved. Always worked.” So . . . how far back does Sasuke remember? . . . . “Heaven help.” Yup. Totally. ^^
“Ewo?” . . . “Ero?” Is that it? . . . . (*snort*) Smart girl, knowing the more complex meaning of “ero” I would’ve thought that if she picked it up, it would just be a way of identifying Jiraiya, not Kakashi as well. But it’s a funny idea. So we’ve got “up,” “no” and “ero.” What next?
O.O Jeezus, that was some mission! . . . . Yay, they’ve got Cheerios in the ninjaverse! ^_^ . . . . Wow, that’s a good one! “Smile?” Man. o_o
Interesting about Mikomi. Makes me curious. Are her legs weak, maybe?
Oh yeah, the pairings. (*sigh*) . . . . Man, that’s scary. Too many brats everywhere. @_@ . . . . So, what’s with the fascination with Cho? . . . . Iruka with the videocamera! That’s great! I love it! =D . . . . Eeek, the little critters are on the move! Run! O.O (One of the weird things about me: dolls and clowns don’t scare me. Babies and little kids do a lot.) . . . . “Going after what we want is a normal Uchiha trait.” Oh, brother. (*rolls eyes*) 9_9 What are you Uchihas, animals with pure instinct? (*shakes head, smiling quietly*) . . . . What’s “face-palmed?” I think I have an idea, but I’m not sure what the gesture looks like.
CHOCOLAAAAATE!!! =DDD . . . . Cute, but the kids are going to be sick later. (Too much chocolate for those little guys.) Oh yeah, and they’ll probably be hyper as hell. No, I don’t think Sasuke and Naruto are going to get any sleep tonight (or an “excuse” for no sleep either *wink*).
Wow, you’re an aunt? Cool! . . . . (*snort*) Nice way of putting it, Itachi. (“Spawned.” XD (No offense, TW, it just sounded funny. I would’ve laughed no matter who he would’ve been talking about. ^^;)) . . . . O.O That is one hell of a threat! O.O . . . . (*snicker*) “It was freaky.” I can imagine. XD;; . . . . You’re kidding me. Your bro’s first word was “perv”? . . . (*blinks*) . . . XDDD Did he know what it meant?
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May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
chapters 51 and 52 were great thanks for updating! :)
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May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My word. 52 chapters? I couldn't write one chapter if my life depended on it.
*steals trulywicked's muse*
It's mine now sucker! *runs off*
Heh. Fun story BTW!
*steals trulywicked's muse*
It's mine now sucker! *runs off*
Heh. Fun story BTW!