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for Why Orange?

by NinjaToadsAteMyBaby

schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
are they ever going to have sex again..*tear*
person a kitsunes light
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!!! Thanks for writing! It was sooo cute! and I can't believe real babies did say those words! The most sweet of all was arashi and the most funny kaji and hikari!+
I will be waiting for the next chapter!!!!
person Moiira
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it! ^^
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
reminds me of my little ones!! it is just sooooo cute!!

anyways T.W. this is a good chapter! a way awesome chapter!!!

keep smilin' and have fun!!!

mar
person gwyllion
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH GOD.....that was the sweetest chappie I had ever read!!! I hope to see more baby moments in the future! Omg please please please! I can't even tell you which are my favorite parts. *flails* All of them were too gooey sweet and adorable! <3333 Especially their first words are hilarious! Can't wait to read more now. Thanks so much for updating! :D
person monrque
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so what happened to Naruto's relatives in wave country?
did they meet his family.
will you go deeper into that
i wanted to hear more about.
this story is always good i love when you update.
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
KAWAII. ><
The babies are so adorable ^_^ I just love them.
can't wait to read your next posting.
Thanks for all your hard work.
Ja Ne.

Love always, Robyn.
person Xenobia
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First of all, congratulations to you and your family!
Wait to you get the first wiff of clean baby smell.

I'm so happy for you!
Awesome update by the by.

>X<
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HURRAY!!!!!!!!!!! yet another great chapter. Im actually glad that this story is so long, you are doing an awsome job developing the story. Keep it up
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow T.W. this chappie was very informative and way awesome as ever! give cookies to your muses for helping you! XD... your ri's danny sounds like someone i happen to know and love as well as hate with a passion...my hubby!!! hehehe

anyways i will be looking forward to seeing the next installment!

as always have fun! ~_^