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Wow, it took me three days to finish this fic.
I love it!! ^_^
Thanks for all your hard work and well done so far.
Can't wait for next posting :)

Love Robyn

this was a really nice chapter alot happened and you did a wonderful job putting it together. and thanks for making it really long too it was a nice treat. don't worry if you feel like the story is to long because it is one of the things i like about it (with my rereading sickness and all that). i love how sasuke and naruto are as a couple and i like how you are detailing their life with the kids (especially arashi who's my favorite). i could totally see mikoma being underneath naruto constantly (like how itachi was trying to stalk i mean catch him). can't wait to see the next chapter.

Chapter 51: Wow, this is gonna be a long one. o_o; . . . . XD “TW: You may not be completely evil but you’re still an ass. Itachi: That’s part of my charm.” Love that! ^_^ . . . . XD You guys are great. ^^

(*chomp* Just a comment for posterity. XD) . . . . I like the bit about “some kitsune having empathic abilities.” I always thought empaths were cool. =D . . . . Love the rock/paper/scissors routine. ^^ . . . . “Hide the kunai?” LMAO!!! XDDD . . . . Hey, you called them both “daddies” this time, instead of one being “mommy.” =) . . . . Niiiiice, Sasuke. ^_^ . . . . Love Kakashi’s oath for the future. ^_^
Cuuuuute, that first image. :heart: . . . . “Back to normal physically.” So no more birth canal, eh? Cool. (Hopefully it won’t appear again, cuz they’ll have enough on their hands for life now.) . . . . I like the details about how and why they get (or don’t get) separation anxiety for Naruto or Sasuke. . . . Oh, I freakin’ LOVE the last parts of this scene!! She called him, “Chichi,” and Sasuke’s all dumbstruck, and then Kakashi takes a picture and says that?! XDDD So sweet and cute and hilarious!! =DDD
Interesting mission.
Oooh (*shivers excitedly*), love Naruto’s growled threat to the assassin and how he takes control of the situation. =D . . . . Ouch. >_< . How does Naruto feel about killing in general, I wonder? . . . . The girl knows Naruto’s from Konoha, but does she know which ninja he is? Or does she just know that he’s some ninja from Konoha? . . . . Holy -- Danzo? Seriously? Wow. (The guy’s a total prick if you ask me.) . . . . “My father refuses [. . .] only solution.” Jeezus, what is this guy, a jacked-up Puritan? ò_ó . . . . You said it better than I, Naruto. (*nods fervently*) . . . . Yay, she’s got major confidence in Naruto. :heart:
Yeah, baby! Ninja village! =D . . . . Wait-wait-waitaminute, back up. Ichigo? Red hair? (*blinks*) Mention of the word “shinigami” earlier? (*blinks*) I think I know where this is going. ô_o . . . . I like seeing Inari like this. =) . . . . I like this line: “Hmm, your grapevine’s a little bit behind.” ^^ And I love how Inari reacts to the news of Naruto’s marriage to Sasuke! XD . . . . Red hair seems common in these parts. . . . OH, AWESOME! “Last of the Ninja from [. . .]”! =DDD . . . . I like what you did with this new character, how you didn’t totally clean him of suspicion and have him a little wary of Naruto as well. Totally natural in the ninja world, I expect. =)
Heh. Love how Naruto’s all, “I know you’re there.” ^^ . . . . “I spent several years [. . .] if anyone’s watching you.” Great line. ^_^ . . . . “I beg your pardon?” (*snort*) XD . . . . Hmm, quite an intro there, Naruto. ô_ô (I wonder what people back home would say.)
Interesting reaction, Shinji. “ I don’t know whether [. . .] or [. . .] to hell.” =) . . . . Okaaay, the chieftain’s reaction is beginning to alarm me. õ_o . . . . Wha, sister? Õ.Ô . . . . Wait. Is there a problem with him being a Konoha ninja, I wonder? õ_õ
Wind dragon, cool. I’d like to see that. . . . Sheesh, one undramatic hit from a chakra scalpel causes this much damage. Yikes.
Okay, Sachiko’s you’re-alive-you’re-okay-so-now-I’m-angry seems a little . . . I dunno, strange with her character to me. õ_ô . . . . And as for you, Inari, that was more smooth. (Not that I approve of you doing it, but I can see you doing it all the same.) . . . . Wow, that must be quite a shock to Naruto. . . . Huh? Naruto thought his parents abandoned him? Wow, I never would’ve thought of that. I always assumed they were dead, so I assumed that he assumed they were dead. The idea of his parents abandoning him never even crossed my mind. I’m glad you put that in there. =D . . . . You’re not the only one who didn’t expect that, Akihiko. (*amused*)
Interesting charm she’s giving him. . . . Wow, quite an honor. (*snicker*) It would be kind of funny when Naruto hears about it, cuz picture this: Leaves the Land of Waves when he’s 12 years old; comes back at 18 to discover the bridge named after him; leaves again; comes back sometime in the future to discover a child’s been named after him; what next? ^^
Be careful, Naruto, you could end up in biiiig trouble if you get caught. . . . Interesting, he doesn’t know who his attacker is. . . . Watch this guy, Naruto. He says he’ll back off his daughter, but he’s a shrewd one, so watch him.
Don’t have much to say about Naruto’s discussion with Tsunade, except the whole thing was excellent. ^_^ And I like the ending line of it, hehehe.
Love the greetings from both of them. ^_^ . . . . “Okakeri nasai?” I don’t know what that means, but I’m guessing it’s that “been a while” line. Am I right? Do I get a cookie? *_* . . . . I love how they smoothly just hold each other from the nursery to the bedroom instead of just going to sex right away. Makes it very real-feeling and natural and secure. =) :heart: . . . . Oh man, that was sneaky. That, “Oh by the way, something happened while you were gone.” It makes us all think about Mikomi’s words, and then the real event comes out. Nice. ^^ . . . . “I hope she inherited Sakura-chan’s temper.” Boy, that’d be scary if anyone disses the kid later in life! 0_0 . . . . (Heheh, Sasuke heard me. ^^) . . . . Aww, “Go to sleep, Naruto.” :heart: :heart: :heart:
Hang on. (*rereads the line “She of course [. . .] immediately.”*) So . . . he’s still alive? I’m not sure, I’m a little grammatically confused here. õ_ô
Mmmm, looove that first line. So . . . soothing. . . . Heh, knew it wouldn’t last too long. I love how quiet Naruto’s worry was shown. No exclamations or words, just rush. . . . Love how Naruto “laughed ruefully.” Like, “Oh well, I kind of expected something like this.” ^^ . . . . Good one, Naruto! You get ‘im! =D (Hee hee, Saaaaaaiiiiiii. *points at Sai, laughing*) XDDDD . . . . (*breaks up laughing again at the cleared throat moment*) XDDDD . . . . (*giggle*) Love how they keep going for Sasuke’s hair. Sasuke, don’t ever cut it, okay? ^^ . . . . His interaction with the kids is great! XD . . . . Oh good, Kakashi’s here. Go to it, Sasuke. ^_^ . . . . Or not. (*sigh*) A ninja’s work is never done.
Ooh, cool! (Stay alive, guys, I mean it.)

Oh, Ri’s back. (*shiver*) She’s not going to scare me this time, is she? ó_ò . . . . the hell? õ_ô . . . . XD Okay, at first I wasn’t so sure I liked this guy, but now that you told me who he is . . . XD I think he’s hilarious. . . . I wonder why he calls you “kitty.” On second thought, I’d rather not know. (*sweat*) . . . . Oh, thanks for the heads-up, Ri! Take your time, you guys, I’m just enjoying the story. ^_^ You know, Ri, we just might be friends. ^^

I barely found out about this fanfiction today. I read all 50 chapters, and I think my brain has turned to mush ((in a good way)). I really ((let me repeat)) really loved your writing! I've pratically squealed my lungs out at this story ((yeah I do that for some reason, sue me)). I really hope you will write another chapter!

I read the latest chapter upon your recs. And WTF?! Naruto and Sasuke should have been TOLD the truth the moment they became Genin! Since according to what i read, Genins are considered as adults! Meaning they had the legal right to know the truth! Naruto should have been told that his parents died-instead of abandoning him! And- the entire thing with Itachi-*shakes head* Someone should have told Sasuke-but they failed BIG time! And now Sasuke will have to hear it from Tobi-whatever his name is. He says he's Madara! But I'm not buying it. There's no way anyone can live that long and NOT age! Remember as you age, your body goes out of shape...There's the cons that comes with old age, gray/white hair, brittle bones, stiff muscles, possible arithis, prone to sicknesses, longer to heal from injuries (My maternal step-grandfather was prone to getting sick, before he died 13 months ago, so I know what I am talking about. And my paternal grandparents are suffering from those systoms now. nd my mom says they are in their 90s... Close to Tobi's supposed age) So it's plain impossible, unless you know some evil magic. My mom once said everyone dies. It's part of life. So I guess what the Akatsuki did to post-prone their life could be considered as unnatural...But Deidara and Itachi didn't do any of that stuff, now I think about it. Itachi's behavior in the manga made ZERO sense at all... Deidara's jutsu was more like a suicide attack. I dunno about Kisame, I suppose we'll be finding out about him, if the manga ever decides to show the fight betweeen him and Suigetsu...Otheriwse loved this chapter. But I still feel that Naruto should have been told the truth about his parents. He's old enough to know...Plus he's strong and can protect himself from Minato's enemies. Unless Rock is suicidal, I doubt anyone would want to tangle with Sasuke!

tw, WILL U MARRY ME!!!!!!!!!! ahem .. sorry about that little outburst. honestly, you just rock! man, i was kthinking you were finished with this fic, but no, you pull a rabbit out of your fic hat and leave us with WAFF. i especially love the part about naru kick danzou's butt ... definitely worth staying up late to read. LOL!


see you next update!

Very well written story. It is nice to have one of these that is not full of anger and torment. Thanks for sharing this.

That was clever. They received four cribs for three babies, then another baby appears.lol

Heavens, girl! I have followed this piece from the beginning.
I read each Author's note and the few aside stories you have written.
Alas, all good things must come to an end but I'll treasure each chappie as they come.

Luv ya chickie!

Hugs and Fiesta kisses,
>X<

that was soo good i cant wait until the next ch