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by YvonneandNeji

schedule February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really felt that quite a few of the characters were OOC especially sakura
I dont really see her as the kinda girl who would kill everyone in the bar even if she were pissed or resigned to be a missing nin. It really isnt necessary and it would draw all kinds of unwanted attention.
schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
when I read the reviews before reading the story and saw "not enough Deidra Sakura stories" I cringed and thought, "Yeah, because there shouldn't be any, ugh." But I have to say that my curiosity got the better of me and I read. It is well written, and your plot was plausible, therefore I'm no longer opposed to the pairing (though probably just for your story). I do like crack pairings, love them, so this is probably as cracky as they come. Thanks for doing this realistically and really well. ^___^ I can't wait to read the next chapter.
schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AHHH yes this makes for a sweet story


i shall read whatever you put up
and i will review each chapter i have decided
i dont know i was never really into Dei/saku until suddenly today iw as like....hmm might be interesting
schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Waaaiii... I finally found it. I like the begining, very origonal. :3
person puff
schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow this is the first time i've ever seen anything like this.... i like it, your grammer was good and spelling was great. And i love the plot i see this going somewhere i hope you decide to continue i'll love you forever if you do!!!! i think it would be awsome if in the next chapter deidara try's to get Sakura to come with him and she keeps giving him i-dont-take-shit-from-you attitude but that's just an ideal. Please update soon!!!! can't wait for the next chappie!!!!

your number one fan: puff
person Wharehouse
schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
An odd story, well written and fairly enjoyable but odd none the less. Keep up the good work!
schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So cool! There aren't NEARLY enough good Deidara/Sakura stories, I can't wait for the next update!!! Make it soon!!!
schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
P.S. Whoever left that last review is WRONG!! This story is AMAZING and not weird at all!!!!!!!