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Ack! You left it there! Not that I'm complaining. Good het is nearly impossible to come by. I really like what is probably going to happen in the next chapter. Poor Sasuke, Sakura's gonna probably get an eyeful of him whacking off. XD I can't wait. I hope school gets less stressful, cause I would really love an update (though I shouldn't talk, I am horrid at updating).

*huggle* thanks for writing.

Very interesting beginning, but 2 things I'm curious about: when in the manga timeline does this occur, and WHY is Naruto "messing around AGAIN" with Sasuke like *that*?? O__O

Ho-ho! Ice cube Sasuke having hot dreams about Sakura-chan! Ah, they're my favourite couple and there are too few stories about them here on adultfanfiction... please, keep writing, I'm getting intrigued! What will make Sasuke lose control?

it was a very decent beginning and i hope you continue with it.

just remember first chapters don't get alot of reviews even for good authors, most people will wait to review until your third or fourth chapter because they dont want to waste a review on an author who is just going to drop the story. So if you only get a couple don't get discouraged that fact that you got SOME is a good sign.

OMG!! This is amazingly written, you must update soon!

Intresting start! I can't wait see how this story expands! Another chapter soon I should hope!

sounds good so far it's really funny and a good plot haven't read one like it yet, so kuddos to you!