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Yay it's the next installment!!! I really liked how naruto didn't totally freak out the next morning when he woke. he knew what he needed and didn't feel ashamed for having to vent out through sex....it made him seem very mature and capable of his decisions in life

-jenn

hey! that was great! yay for SasuNaru!! whoop!!!! can't wait for the next chapter, do you mind if you can alert me when you post it up? thanks so much!! oh and i also noticed some mistakes where it's suppose to be negative, but it was typed out as a positive, like for example: 'I can see' should be "I can't see" and yea that was sort of confusing to sift through but not a huge problem. ^_^ can't wait for chapter 3, lots of luv!!!

I'm happy for Naruto. He got rid of the backstabbing slut, Sakura and found Sasuke again. Hury with the next chapter!!!

What an intriguing story ^^ you have the reason of Sakura's unfaithfullness reasonable. Wonder what will she do upon knowing that Naruto will be writhing working under Sasuke from now on. Kukukuku...

Wow, I think I officially hate Sakura, she's very thick, Sasuke doesn't even like her, and she has the nerve to think that shes not like every other fan girl out there when she is in fact identical to every other fan girl out there. Don't like her. I hope Sasuke and Naruto get along :D LOL cause we know they don't ussually. And I hope I don't offend you when I say this, but I'm crossing my fingers that Sasuke isn't the typical perverted Seme like he is in lots of other stories, where he thinks of sex 24/7 and continuously gropes Naruto to no end, I can't stand those stories it just makes him seem s PERVERTED, and way not look the cool, emotionless Sasuke that we love... So cross my fingers that Sasuke woos (lol crappy word) Naruto in a much more classier nonperverted fashion :D.

Anyways I loved the update, and the explanation of Sakura's infidelity, Now I feel for Naruto, Sasuke AND Sai. But everytime I read about Naruto talking about how Sakura cheated on him I keep thinking back to how cool and collected Naruto was when he caught them red handed, gosh I fell in love with his level-headed right then!

Okies, I've raved long enough, Can't wait for your next update! :o)

very good. makes Sakura understandable if still wrong and pathetic. can't wait to see Sasuke and Naruto's first official meeting.

I like it. Loved how you went in with the past of everything that had happened. I can't wait until the next chapter. I want to see what's going to happen with Sasuke and Naruto, and when those two and Sakura all finally run into each other.

Let the two have sex on that mahogany desk! XD

cheesy dialogue. mistakes with past and present tense. get a beta. plots decent.

Evil cliffie!!!
That was a great chapter! Time was up before I got tired reading... nyah!!! You have a knack for explaining stuff to us so we know where you are going... which is great from my POV... please update as soon as you can... I'm dying to know what's gonna be her reaction to this!!! Nyah!!! XD