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for Love Deeper

by CherryJade

schedule February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooohhhhhh... this promises a lot of good laughs and soft moans... nyah! me likes! Write more! I would love to be a fly on the wall to see their reaction when they realize they are boss and secretary... LOL that will definitely be worth reading... good style... smooth and flowing... keep up the good work, ne?
person Akiru chan
schedule February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW. I simply loved it. You must continue it. I can't wait to see what happens.
person ai-chan
schedule February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kyah!
I love it!
also love the fact you put the prologue n chap 1 together lol
love how sexxie yooh made sasuke~
love how you made the story go around~~
much love!
person Adi
schedule February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
writers like you come along less frequently than a blue moon
you have the perfect balance of description and action that keeps the reader interested.
so in case you haven't noticed, i LOVED this chapter
the writing flowed so well from one scene to another, i was rather surprised there wasnt a detailed smut scene, but i think its better without.
i like the story line too!
i cant wait for the next update,
oh and i love your angry!naruto (very hot)
person Adi
schedule February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
erm i cheated too XD
i looked your fic up on ff.net
and it was really REALLY good!
happy belated birthday btw (don't know what time zone you're in, but its the 17th here)
love your work, hope to see more SasuNaru stories from you!
person shinshin
schedule February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i'm so gonna wait this to continue! I love the idea.
schedule February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great start! Sasuke is soo cool, I wonder what kinda turn their relationship will take when Naruto finds out that Sasukes company was the one that brought his...

Update soon!
person Jen
schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Before I accuse you of anything, I was wondering if you had posted this on ff.net? ... and i love this story. I also remember around... 4 chapters? So if it's yours I expect updates quickly. Because you've already written them...

Jen
person barara
schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good! i liked it! post more soon!
person marcii07
schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh.....I'm all excited about the next chappie!! ^_^ YAY!! I now have something to really look forward to! No pressure though. *hugs* As far as I know, this plot is pretty unique. Anyway, I kind of thought that Naruto's decision was a little hasty...but who knows? Maybe he was blinded by Sasuke's smexiness!

Muuwaaaahahahahahaaa!

Thanks for sharing!!

*Me