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That was short and yet ohhh so hot! I loved it. That Sakura. Let me not start on her. So Sasuke's gonna make Naruto forget. I like that idea alot. Update soon!

intesting, intresting!^^
Like it so far!XD

I like it so far except that it was Sai that Sakura cheated on, he's just way too fruity.

I like the plot, the idea and the basic story. This looks like something I would get hooked on. However, if I were you, I would polish this fic by getting a beta to fine tune the grammar and the word usage. Or, maybe all you need to do is check for mistakes once you're finished with each chapter. Keep going with this; I'm looking forward to reading more.

I'm sorry!!! I just found your story on ff.net and it is in fact your story. Thank goodness! Well update with the three chapters you already have! And then write more! Bye!

ok i admit it, i cheated....i really loved your story! so after i read it, i went ahead and read all the reviews you got. when i realized some of your reviews said you had more chapters posted on ff.net, i looked for it there and read the next two chapters! it's sooo good so far! i really like it...i can't wait to hear what happens next! don't worry though i will still leave a review for every chapter here (even though i have already read ahead on ff.net) keep up the good work, i'll be waiting for your next update!!!

-jenn