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for Love Deeper

by CherryJade

person HikanDas
schedule February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"A smirk danced on Itachi’s lips at their faces. It was nice to have someone see his inner coolness. Inner Itachi nodded also at the statement. "

SERIOUSLY THE BEST QUOTE EVER!!!!!!
I just had to save it on my desktop so I can look at it from time to time.
Also I can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
In a hury but had to say Im glad youre back. Keep writing and remember to spell and grammar check. Like the story, update soo. Ja
schedule February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Happy Birthday!! Love your story so much, I really like the way you have writen it out and presented it. Can not wait till you put a new chapter out.
person Baxter
schedule February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely luv ur story u definitly have 2 update soon :)
person yrensil
schedule February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really don't know how to make reviews, so I think that this will be a mere comment. The story is really good, somehow unpredictable and I really like that. I enjoy reading the story and it is really catchy. On my part, once you read it you'll never stop asking for more. Actually, the suspense is killing me. The characters kept their personalities as it is, though some are not what I expect them to be. I always think that Neji is a smart and gentle type, a little Sasuke like but a lot nicer. Maybe, the personalities are there but a little twist.
The story is really good and I'm almost captured by it. Just the way I want most of Yaoi love should be. It is really cute and lovable. Also, the story always favor to the main characters. I know that it is not finish yet but I know it will have a good progress. Just don't make those two(Sasuke and Naruto) break up, I'll cry and die! He he he! that is a joke...
I don't have more comments to give because I love the story so much. I hope the ending will be near soon. I hope the writer continued this great start the he or she have (sorry I can't distinguish). This is the first on-going story that I read that make me love it already. That's why I gave a review. This is also my first review. I'm apologizing to the writer for not making a good review, I'm no good at all. But over-all, I'm thumbs up to your story. I love it very much! Hope to see you continue writing it. Thanks for making such a nice story. I never stopped giggling. People around here thinks I'm already crazy. Hey, they're taking me to asylum, wait! He he he!
Well, Goodluck! Wish you the best!
person hisoka
schedule February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
another piece of pineapple upsidedown cake to add to the list of twisted desserts.if itachi were a different man id have expected him to say 'yeah im the shit'when naruto called him cool but as he is itd be scary, like a rich proper person with that look down thier nose at you face to speak in slang.not a pretty sight.so sasuke and naruto are together and theres nothing really changed except they touch a bit more,you could swear they were already together with the way they acted.wonder how theyre gonna plow throught the shit theyre in to get to the glory they want.hope you can update soon
person Gwyllion
schedule February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Waaaahhhh! You don't know how happy I was to see an update from you! Your Naruto is sooooo adorable to his obsessed and possessive Sasuke. XD I'm so happy that a tramp like Karin had finally forced Naruto to confess. Now they gotta put her in her place, just like Neji and Gaara....and not to mention Sakura. Amazing job once again! Btw....are you in Yaoi-gallery? Because if you aren't, I would recommend you to post this fic there, and I KNOW everyone would eat it up and worship you forever. There's a huge Naruto fandom in there with awesome people for support and relate to. Seriously, I would love to see you join. Oh yeah! And happy belated birthday! Wishing you many happy days and plot bunnies to fill up your time! <3
person mikepd87
schedule February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow love ur story cam going cant wait 2 read more and happy early birthday
schedule February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo new chapter. I was soo waiting for this, and you DID NOT disappoint. GRRR, Karin bitch. I saw we gather a posse kill her. O__o
schedule February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i never did like that karin person. yay sasuke and naruto are together! i love this story btw