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for Love Deeper

by CherryJade

person monrque
schedule February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is so goooooood update soooooon.
This is the first time i saw this story and i'm glad
i've read it. I will look forward to the next post.
I hope you have a very happy birthday
person dutsada
schedule February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke and Naruto are finally together!! yay~~ but man.. Karin is going to give them trouble huh... anyway.. thank you for such a wonderful chapt. Hope the next one will be up soon~~~
person animelover
schedule February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG This chappie was hilarious!!!!! i can see a mad, dripping wet sasu chasing a giggling naru. priceless. oh, and sakura is pretty pathetic by this time. hmmm, think she and karin will pair up to be the anti-sasunaru duo? ewwwww!
person Telpei
schedule February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Best line ever from chapter 4: That he was so sort of snuggly person who hugged what ever was in his bed at the moment? Well that was sort of true but now was not the time to go down that path.
And then Sasuke called him Snuggles!! Haha, so priceless! I love it!!! :)
person Vibora
schedule February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
waaaah!
what is she going to do!?
naruto and sasuke are so cute together!
happy birthday!!!
schedule February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! yay! im soo glad Naruto confessed to Sasuke!! and WTH is Karin planning on doing?! the biish better stay away!! XD
and Happy Belated birthday!! <3 ^__^
schedule February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic story .... I love the plotline and the characterisation - particularly that of Sasuke. It's always nice to see a bit of Sakura bashing and I love the way that you've written the relationship between Sasuke and Naruto. Fantastic chapter length as well - they're really long and full of slashy goodness. Happy Birthday for Monday and I look forward to reading a new chapter. Belle
person sugar
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please I hope there is more chapters coming up I love this story :)
schedule January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg what a relief!! it's Sai's baby, not Naruto's.
im so glad, so when's the next chappie coming out?
i'm really really anxious to read it! can't wait!
schedule January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow i finally had the chance to read this story! im really loving it so far, barely finished reading chapter 4.
man Sakura is such a slut!! I'm glad Naruto treats her like that after what she did to him, then she goes off saying she's pregnant! I doubt it, but if she is plesae don't let it be Naruto's child. It would cause a huge impact on a lot of things!
I'm really looking foward to reading the rest of the chapters, i still have school work to do lol thats a reason i didnt continue reading.