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June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First thing I got to say is: I totally fell in love with this story. I love how you made Sasuke less than a stuck up than he really is, because in my opinion, I never seen a human having that of a personality so I give you props for making him more human-like. Naruto of course, always to optimistic one and always trustful, that's what I love about him. Though it's strange that so suddenly Sakura just slept with Sai besides Naruto having a busier schedule and Naruto's assumption on Sai and Sasuke looking alike?? Can't wait for the next chapter
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June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love this story!! cannot wait to see more
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June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
heya, hate to be a stickler, but this one thing was bugging me, but hey, if you're going to use Japanese you might as well do it right. =) Teme in Japanese is just a very rude way to say 'you' (the you pronouns are kind of rude in Japanese anyway) so yeah, 'bastard' is about the best translation they can give us... well when Naruto says TEME! at least... they generally translate it as 'you' when he puts it in a sentance, but ANYWAY saying 'you teme' doesn't really make any sense.
Otherwise, keep the chapters coming. =)
Otherwise, keep the chapters coming. =)
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June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, yeay! You mentioned home! Nobody ever talks about the good old SA. In fact sometimes I think I must be the only fan girl in the country.
Thank you for the fic, it is really enjoyable.
Thank you for the fic, it is really enjoyable.
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June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful story. I really loved how (aside from the one night stand) you didn't just jump into smut, rather choosing to develop their relationship instead. Really a great story. Keep up the fantastic work!
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June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i am constantly amazed by how awesome fics sneak under my radar. this is a totally cool fic, and i just found it today! yeah, i know, i'm a dunce. ;-)
anyway, loving how you portray sasunaru, and naru's response to sakura's slip up. it's funny that sasuke doesn't even remember her name. ;-) LOL!
good job and see you soon!
anyway, loving how you portray sasunaru, and naru's response to sakura's slip up. it's funny that sasuke doesn't even remember her name. ;-) LOL!
good job and see you soon!
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June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the story! Oh, and if you don't have one yet, I can be your beta. No school or work for me! I'm totally free all summer and bored. Help a girl out, huh? Hehe. *wide, charming smile*
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April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey, hey, *poke* hey... when ya gonna update? ^^ me luffs this to death *huggles fic* *hands over a Sasuke and Naruto plushie* incentive to update ^^ X333
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April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't know why you deceided to stop, but this was a good story. All the characters cross tension really made it interesting. If you ever continue, it will be most welcome.
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November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH WOWOWOWOW!!!! It's been such a long time since I have read such a great fic such as yours. I'm absolutely addicted! The plot caught my attention and I seriously am so glad to have read it. My heart goes to Naruto and the way you wrote Sakura made me believe her to be a downright bitch. And HOMG Sasuke! Hubba hubba! What a sexy and hot guy he is....*flails* They fit perfectly together in this story and I hope Sakura won't ruin their soon to be relationship. I really hope you will continue writing this wonderful fic too. Thank you so much for writing this. Can't wait to read more from you. And please keep up the wonderful work! You got me so addicted.....such an awesome plot! :D