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April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I would like to beta for you! I have experience in writing a bit and believe I could be a good help. I really love your story by the way, the storyline is enthralling.
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April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You have a good story going ^^ I like it. I've had you bookmarked for awhile now but haven't dropped by to say anything yet. ^_- I might be able to help you Beta. It would be better if you found another one as well because I am not a English major hwoever it would be fun to do. Plus it would give me extra practice on proofing papers. I hate college papers...=C. ^^ If you would like me to do a proof proof read to see if I can help you can e-mail me and I will get back to you ne? BUT. I still love your story. ^__________- Gambatte!
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April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i so love this story. for sakura's forehead to be so big she really doesn't have a clue do she. i like how naruto is standing firm on the not taking sakura back part and is not wishy washy( how you are keeping him in character). are you going to have sasuke in a situation where sakura has set up sasuke and he thinks he cheated or lied to him. i can't wait to see to find out.
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April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhhhhh i love your story... please update soon (^^,
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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Me likes this chappie. When is Kakashi and Iruka going to show up? Or are they in your fic? I hope so. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The bitch - I really hope the baby isn't Naruto's but then on the other hand I really feel for Sai because he's getting stuck with someone who was just using him although the baby might be welcome news for him... *sigh* as for Sasuke and Naruto heh - that was a very hot dream :d or memory - both ^_^ and I can't wait for more action, I also like the way that even though they've slept together you didn't rush them into anything just yet :d makes me anticipate it more loool anyway.
Update again when you can ne?
Hina xXxx
Update again when you can ne?
Hina xXxx
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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the story so far, which is why I hope that you update soon. Additionally, I am quite in love with your writing style, keep up the good work!
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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is one of my new favorites! The story line has some great plot twists and the romance between the two boys is written so sweetly! I'm really looking forward to seeing the rest of the story unfold, I hope Sakura doesn't ruin anything between our boys! If you still need a beta I could try to help!
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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sakura is bent on getting through to Naruto, isn't she? Well...she can try harder. Though....if she really is pregnant...
It's going pretty good...no, scratch that, it's turned out magnificent!!
Hey...can we please get some little Ita x Naru please? Nothing serious obviously but we just dont get enough of that around here....:(
Ki`Tara
It's going pretty good...no, scratch that, it's turned out magnificent!!
Hey...can we please get some little Ita x Naru please? Nothing serious obviously but we just dont get enough of that around here....:(
Ki`Tara
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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story and I would love to be your Beta. I am a grammar and spelling fanatic. Especially in the stories I like... teehee! Hit me up if you don't already have any options!