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Cool that Naruto has Shikamaru on his team too. Well, even though all the characters are totally different from the original series, this story is a nice break from the normal ones. I look forward to Sasuke and Naruto growing closer. :)

I really like your story and it has alot of potential, but I think you rushed alot of background work when you forged ahead in chapter 2. The way you have written the story, the audience isn't able to see the progress that Shika, Naruto, and Lee made with the help of Gai-sensei. Naruto even mentioned having killed someone and that is how he learn the Kage Bushin. Also, these kids are really young and I doubt all that forth coming with their emotions, and you have two of the most emotionally stunned charaters all emo with each other, spilling about their pain and rapes. That isn't very reasonable. I like this fic though and will continue to read it anyways with or without any changes. Thank you for your time.

It's cool. I liked this chappie alot. It wasn't wasted to me. I feel kinda fuzzy when i get an image of small Sasuke, Shika, and Naru together. It's rather cute. It's also good that Iruka is living with Naruto now. Good chap. Cant wait for the next update.

Wow, i must say, i am highly intriugued by this story with just the first chapter. Very good. And a very addictive plot you have going on in the background as well. Loved it so far. Do update soon.

as big of a fan as i am of "the five minute fuck" i have to say that ultimatly, a long fic (which, i may be wrong, but this certainly sounds like ^.^) is only really interesting if theres a definite plot and the ground work laid out already sounds quite promising. i like the way you have the characters out of character actually, because its very justified and, being an AU fic, they probably wouldn't be exactly the same anyways. i think you're keeping then IC for what you laid out. makes me happy. the depressing thing about fics with actual plot is they don't come out real fast, but ill definitly still be waiting when the next chapter finally comes *fic love*

There were a few typos etc but interesting so far.

Thank you for the update, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

This is really different but I like it. :)

This plot is definitely original enough for me to ignore some of the OOC in the story. I like it so far.

Please update soon! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

hmmm. keep it coming This is intrigueing so far and I can't wait for more.

1) OMG your warnings made me laugh, oh the horror of a happy ending *-* 2) purple eyes?!?!?!?! can i say how much i love you right now? 3) i kinda feel worse for sasuke in this than naruto, just cause naruto deals with his shit and sasuke doesnt. 4) omg update, because... well, just because. *fic love* ^.^