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February 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it. I like it a lot. Please tell me it's continued in some manner? Please?
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi-
You did a great job, but the whole sex bare, especially when Kiba's not used to it, was tough, when actually he'd be bleeding. Oh, and if it hasn't already been pointed out, I think you're going for stoic and not sonic to describe Sai.
It was a great, new paring.
Slave
You did a great job, but the whole sex bare, especially when Kiba's not used to it, was tough, when actually he'd be bleeding. Oh, and if it hasn't already been pointed out, I think you're going for stoic and not sonic to describe Sai.
It was a great, new paring.
Slave
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
THAT. WAS. FRICKIN'. GREAT!!!
I've never read a Kiba/Sai before. VEEEEERY NICE!
I've never read a Kiba/Sai before. VEEEEERY NICE!
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April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*pinches nose bridge*
That has to be the hottest thing I've ever read...
SEQUEL!
Pweety pwease? *puppy eyes*
I've read tons upon tons of yaoi stories and for a first time yaoi writer, you got it perfect.
Completely unique pairing. Wish more people would write this pair. You got both Sai and Kiba's characters down pat.
Hope my first story turns out nearly half as good.
Now I'm your biggest fan!
Ougon
That has to be the hottest thing I've ever read...
SEQUEL!
Pweety pwease? *puppy eyes*
I've read tons upon tons of yaoi stories and for a first time yaoi writer, you got it perfect.
Completely unique pairing. Wish more people would write this pair. You got both Sai and Kiba's characters down pat.
Hope my first story turns out nearly half as good.
Now I'm your biggest fan!
Ougon
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March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story that was hot!! yeah you should do seqeul! SAi/Kiba is a great pairing.
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February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes... you should squeal in delight for writing an awesome one shot and you should definitely consider doing a sequel.
Kiba and Sai doing the deed is freaking hot!
Kiba and Sai doing the deed is freaking hot!
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February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
do a sequel!
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February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You should squeal. Loudly. And a lot. This was great! I haven't read smut this good since... I can't really remember. Anyways... Great pairing idea. I think the reason I liked it so much is because SaiKiba is indeed like SasuNaru. And I'm a huge SasuNaru fan. I loved the little SasuNaru hints you added in too.
You developed the attraction very well, so the prospect of an actual relationship taking place seems very real. I kinda feel bad that Kiba has to buy 'the bottom-less pit' food for four weeks, but, like he said, it's worth it. Plus, maybe Sasuke can get all possessive and refuse to allow anyone else to feed his dobe^.^
You developed the attraction very well, so the prospect of an actual relationship taking place seems very real. I kinda feel bad that Kiba has to buy 'the bottom-less pit' food for four weeks, but, like he said, it's worth it. Plus, maybe Sasuke can get all possessive and refuse to allow anyone else to feed his dobe^.^
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February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you were asking if you should do a sequel... There's a typo there. Well, if you don't mind, I would very much like to read a sequel... SaiKiba is hot so more smut with those two will be awesome!
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February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, let me catch my breath. That was without a doubt one of the most sensual stories I have ever read! There were a few spelling and grammar mistakes, but those can always be fixed later. I highly encourage you to make a sequal. It would be hilarious if Naruto finds out! Thanks for posting!
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