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February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You scared me so much. But it was okay :). That was beautiful, and I'm with you on that. Those two would know each other. After everything they've been through, even in another life or another world, they would know each other.
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February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!!!!!!! SO CUTE!!!!!!! The angst from Sasuke and the emotion from Naruto!!!!! *cries from happiness*
And Naruto's final phrase... I Love it!!!!!!
And Naruto's final phrase... I Love it!!!!!!
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February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwww! (sniffles in happiness) I'm glad that had a happy ending despite the angst. Beautiful story ^_^
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February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my god...i'm crying...this is such a great story. thank you.
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February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg that was sooo adorable, i'm so happy with the ending!! i was so close to crying so many times while reading this lol, the last line was so sweet
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February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AH... you made me cry in less than 5 minutes. It was very well written. I loved all the little hints that your dropped throughout the story about Naruto. Sasuke's turmoil is heartwrenching.
Just one little spelling mistake. "Turning, he gathered up his suit jacket and tossed it carelessly over his and walked out into the reception area."
He tossed it carelessly over his... "shoulder". or did you mean "this"?
Good job! Just wonderful! Aw.. too bad its only a oneshot!
Just one little spelling mistake. "Turning, he gathered up his suit jacket and tossed it carelessly over his and walked out into the reception area."
He tossed it carelessly over his... "shoulder". or did you mean "this"?
Good job! Just wonderful! Aw.. too bad its only a oneshot!
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February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg, i want to CRY!!!! that was so sad, and so good, and so wonderful and hopeful and... just GAH!! thank you for sharing such a lovely piece. it's one of my very favorites now.
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February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sniffles* that was such a good story. i cried my eyes out.you're talented writer. i mean it was sooooo sad!!!!! naruto had to suffer because of sasuke.but the ending was awesome!! good job! i give it five stars!!!!