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person hatorissexbitch
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was SAD!!
person Kaishiou
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
whoa...nothing feels better than revenge! i always love when someone put Sasuke in his place. nice chapter overall. i hope there is a continuation. =D
person animehead
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my...this is wonderful. Angst!!! It makes me want to cry for Sasuke even though he was a bastard. It makes me want to hit Naruto even though I know how he feels. It's the first chapter and i am already hooked. I love it. I can't wait to read more.
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is really good. I really like the line about the anger in Hinata's eyes - it just stands out to me for some reason. I can't wait to see how this story goes!
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I'll keep an eye on this one.