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June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MAN that was so cool. I am starting to think that Kakashi IS narutos uncle because I have heard that theory in many others places :) keep up with the chapters!
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May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi-
I have to tell you that this is among the best fic. I have found on this site to date. The other is DANCE. But I love that you are staying true to the actual characters, though their relationship has bloomed. So many times, in fic, the authors turn them into something they're not.
My only other comment is that while I liked the two different sceens, so much more information was conveyed in the second one. And I must admit, that unlike many in the Yaoi world, I'd actually like them to find joy in submitting to the other, I don't think you actually have to change their characters to do it either, especially considering the skill you have shown to date. Thanks. WS
I have to tell you that this is among the best fic. I have found on this site to date. The other is DANCE. But I love that you are staying true to the actual characters, though their relationship has bloomed. So many times, in fic, the authors turn them into something they're not.
My only other comment is that while I liked the two different sceens, so much more information was conveyed in the second one. And I must admit, that unlike many in the Yaoi world, I'd actually like them to find joy in submitting to the other, I don't think you actually have to change their characters to do it either, especially considering the skill you have shown to date. Thanks. WS
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May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
VERY HOT!!!
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May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O__O
That was one of the hottest and smuttiest chappie I have ever read! Bravo to you! And my my....clones! You seriously made my night. Can't wait to read your latest. Thanks so much for sharing! :D
That was one of the hottest and smuttiest chappie I have ever read! Bravo to you! And my my....clones! You seriously made my night. Can't wait to read your latest. Thanks so much for sharing! :D
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May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.M.GGGGGGGGG Naruto gang bang Sasuke *DROLLLLLLLLLL* "Ew that’s too much....MAKE IT STOP!!!"
BREAKING NEW
Author was found dead from drowning in her on droll.
Author was found dead from drowning in her on droll.
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May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
**Puppydog begging eyes** Please more. I would really love to read more.
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May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the second was better
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May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay chapters! i just read 13 and 14, great by the way, it's 7:30 am, and i guess... i'm off to bed. i liked the sasunaru scene and am so excited to read the narusasu one, but i'm exhausted. so, goodnight -morning- WHATEVER!! stupid sasuke...~
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May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved both the SasuNaru and the NaruSasu! I would love for you to have them take turns being seme and uke. I just don't see Sasuke letting Naruto be dominant all the time. This story keeps getting better and better! :)
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May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like SasuNaru one better!!!!!!!
keep up the good work
can't wait to find out what happens next ^_^^_^^_^^_^
update soon onegai =D
keep up the good work
can't wait to find out what happens next ^_^^_^^_^^_^
update soon onegai =D