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May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very good! can't wait for next chapter in the story! :D
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May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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The NaruSasu chapter...O____O...You are one perverted albeit creative impractical yet hot lomon writer person dude. ...Yeah that sentence deosn't make sense to me either..but DUDE.
YOU STOLE MY IDEA! I am working on a oneshot that includes Sasuke, Naruto, and lots of Kage bunshin action but you did it before me! GAH! Now I will have to think up something original! GRR!
I LOVE YOU THOUGH!
~Lihrah
-points and yells- PERVERT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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The NaruSasu chapter...O____O...You are one perverted albeit creative impractical yet hot lomon writer person dude. ...Yeah that sentence deosn't make sense to me either..but DUDE.
YOU STOLE MY IDEA! I am working on a oneshot that includes Sasuke, Naruto, and lots of Kage bunshin action but you did it before me! GAH! Now I will have to think up something original! GRR!
I LOVE YOU THOUGH!
~Lihrah
-points and yells- PERVERT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have no particular preferrence over Naru/Sasu, Sasu/Naru, (though it is nice to see naruto as the dominant since it always seems to be sasuke) But i liked the Sasu/ Naru better. Not to say i didnt like the Naru/Sasu. oh well! till next time!
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May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS HOT!!!!
I realy needed a block of ice after this smut. I must tell you, even if like sasu/naru more, your Naru/Sasu smut was so good, I nealy died from bloodloss. The Naru/Sasu was better, I think, though I like both of them! Now I need to know, what Sasu-chan is up to. Can't wait for the next chapter!
I realy needed a block of ice after this smut. I must tell you, even if like sasu/naru more, your Naru/Sasu smut was so good, I nealy died from bloodloss. The Naru/Sasu was better, I think, though I like both of them! Now I need to know, what Sasu-chan is up to. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Grate chapter!!!!I thionk that the Naru/Sasu = Naruto tops Smut was way better and hotter then the Sasu/Naru Smut. I really like the Sasuke gang-banging that ROCK. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was so hot! Both chapters are great but I liked the 2nd one better.
Naruto's clones definitely are useful ;).
Naruto's clones definitely are useful ;).
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May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woot I got to double my pleasure and read two lemons...wow I'd have to Naruto's was my fave...I mean wow...underwater smut! Kinky man...very kinky! Though Sasuke's was creative too....hehehe can't wait to see what happen next!
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May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Luv ya for SasuNaru smut ;* I read NaruSasu too, clone sex was good idea I enjoyed this chapter too XD but still Sasu-seme is way better *.*
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May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHH I love the SasuNaru smut. OMG its great.
I read a NaruSasu smut once, and I didn't like it. I just can't see Naruto as a seme >.>
Anyway, great job with the smut, you are the best -hugs-
I read a NaruSasu smut once, and I didn't like it. I just can't see Naruto as a seme >.>
Anyway, great job with the smut, you are the best -hugs-
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May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hm.
I read both. And although I have a passion for NaruSasu and it's my favorite pairing (Since SasUKE is so yummy), the SasuNaru lemon was more in tune with the fic, I feel that your NaruSasu lemon, while hot, came from a different fic or a oneshot.
NaruSasu was hot, but not my favorite. Maybe I was expecting a better one (since your SasuNaru was so good!) but hmmm...;_; *sniff*
But it's still a very good fic! ^_^ I say, keep the SasuNaru and the NaruSasu one post it as a oneshot or something. :P
I read both. And although I have a passion for NaruSasu and it's my favorite pairing (Since SasUKE is so yummy), the SasuNaru lemon was more in tune with the fic, I feel that your NaruSasu lemon, while hot, came from a different fic or a oneshot.
NaruSasu was hot, but not my favorite. Maybe I was expecting a better one (since your SasuNaru was so good!) but hmmm...;_; *sniff*
But it's still a very good fic! ^_^ I say, keep the SasuNaru and the NaruSasu one post it as a oneshot or something. :P