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by Jelp

schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was great i hope you write a Sasuke/Naruto smut scene next. :D
person Anon
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love i love! update update!
person !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Naruto was going to find out just how well Sasuke could fuck around…

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person dana
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i so love the dokedui(mis.) character she is like a snake version of the hokage. her relationship and the things she says to sasuke really reminds me of naruto's interactions with the fifth. also to put my vote in i think you should make this sasuke (seme) and naruto (uke) all the way with occasional switches. i just think that the blazin crazyhomocidialpossessivesmexy sasuke's personality is tops. i can not wait to see the next chapter.
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story seems interesting so far but I have school and I'm only on chapter three so I'll review again when I make more progress... for now good night and great plot so far.
person bea-chan
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you know you want to write NaruSasu xD

SasuNaru only is BORING. Because in most of the fics they have seme Sasuke. i want some SasUKE damnit~!

And yay, hell with cannon! :P
person jewel
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love the story so far. question though are you planning on showing anything about Kakashi revealing Naruto's heritage? Does anyone else know? Also how is Naruto going to react to Erosennin keeping a secret like that? Did Jiryaia tell Tsunade about the cocktail that Sasuke gave Naruto? Can't wait for the next chapter.
person Anon
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I HATE NarutoSasuke....I won't read it...
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heh either way works for me, NaruSasu SasuNaru they're both great ^_6 and I liked this chaper :d it was good and the take on Sasuke's thoughts during the whole meeting was a good one ^_^ I really like your snake summons lol I'd wrap myself around Naruto too if I could... and Sasuke...*coughs* well, moving on swiftly lol :d yeah smut *rubs hands together* I like the sound of that and well, anyway, it was good. So Sasuke told Naruto to wait until he made his move? I'm wondering if by that you mean when Naruto heard that Orochimaru was dead in the manga or if it's something different. Either way I'm definitely looking forward to finding out ^_^ Thanks for the update ^_6

Hina xXxx
person Vienna
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story *.* And idea of Naruto with glasses was interesting >> And smut.. you know I would like to read SasuNaru (woot for Sasu-seme I think it'll better really) but you'll do as you want ;)