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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heheh....I love Sasuke's snake! She's too cute! I want one just like her! hehe anyway..normally I'm all for Sasu/Naru...but you said a combo and that sounds great! can you do that awww man I'd love to read that!
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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooo i like this but whats the last chapt?
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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love how you mixed canon in your story, especially these last two chapters. So Naruto is finally going to find out what Sasuke did to him on his birthday. Yay!!! I love Sasuke/Naruto and Naruto/Sasuke so a mix of both would be cool! :)
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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Prefer Naruto and Sasuke thank you very much!!!!!!!!!!!!
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May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah! What an awesome chapter. I really like how you melded the manga into this version. I can't wait to see more from you. Thanks for sharing! :)
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May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I love updates! Especially on great great stories! I like Dokueki! I normally dont like characters outside of the original manga, but Dokueki is definitely a wonderful addition! Aww Sasuke has a snake friend ^.^ Yay! I hope she is in later chapters too! Maybe Sasuke will take her to meet Naruto sometime! Woot! Well cant wait to read the next chapter!
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am in love with this story i wish Sasuke would just go back to Naruto!
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April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
your story is great, don't worry about spoilers, us, your fans are supposed to know about the history, that's why we search for an alternate script for our own pleasure, so, no worries²!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!and: update please!!
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April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
getting very interesting. can't wait for the next chapter.
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April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Lol, I actually said 'YES!' outloud when I realised there were more chapters ^ ^