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by Jelp

schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was good as always and the smut was more than okay :) I really like this story so thanks for the update lol :) cheered em up and well. It was interesting what you did. When Sasuke came out with the syringe I was like O_O eh? what's he doing? but so - it was actually like a normal injection to build antibodies against poisons? anyway, cool chp. ^_6

Hina xXxx
person mary
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice....it could have been slightly longer but if that is what your muse wants to put out that's ok...love still. how many more chappies?
person Gwyllion
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH MAN...THIS FIC IS GETTING REALLY GOOD! I REALLY WANT TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. GREAT JOB YOU HAVE DOWN HERE. WILL TRY TO WAIT PATIENTLY FOR YOUR NEXT CHAPTER....WHY AM I WRITING IN CAPS? TOO LAZY TO ERASE AND REWRITE AGAIN...SORRY. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!
person Anon
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was great, but why would Sasuke give Naruto poison then the antidote and a weird one at that? Why give him something to make Naruto's system immune to certain poisons? Hurry with the next chapter!!!
person Beachan18
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...>_<

I was really hoping you wouldn't follow cannon in Sasuke leaving and following Orochimaru...>_< sad sad

But hmmm, are you going to deviate from cannon for the next chapter? It would be great if Sasuke finally came to his senses and left Orochimaru to train on his own...

Smutt. I need some smutt for the next chapter~! Please~! (And I'm hoping it will become AU later :P)
person Trish
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I L.O.V.E this story! I can't wait till Naruto and Sasuke meet again! I hope hey have a happy ending!
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So glad to see another chapter! So is Naruto going to have to wear glasses now? I love forward to the Naruto/Sasuke action next chapter! :)
person Anon
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can't to read the next chapter!!
person mary
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow.....i wonder if they will be free to do what they need to in order to "fix what needs fixing" and.....urgh who am i kidding....this story rocks! i would love a good kind of ending! *prays that there is one*
person chishio_rikka
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story XD Your a genius it actually makes sense for Naruto to be partially blind. heh I have no idea how people like you can come up with brilliant ideas and explanations like that. please keep updating ^^