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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
is sasuke going to take over the sound and naruto joins him or is sauke going to go back to the leaf. if we get to put a request in i choose that they stay in the sound. to be honest i do not like the villagers of the leaf to much and think that they don't deserve naruto or sasuke (especially naruto). come to think of it since they sweat sasuke so much they don't deserve him neither. i can't wait for the next update of your grat story.
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting chapter - Naturo can't see that well? I'm wondering if it's just normal eyesight problems or if it could be more... something tells me that it could be but we'll see ne? And Sasuke just about realised what he done, hmm. Well - if only he could do that in the friggin manga - stupid teme (I love him really) but anyway loool. I'll stop before I rant. It was a good chapter ^_6
Hina xXxx
Hina xXxx
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay. i submit myself, body and soul to you.
take me. im yours.
take me. im yours.
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YOUR STORY IS LIKE WOW...lol it sad that Sasuke did that but...he as to learn...
oh and smut in the next ch
.............................................................................................................................................................................................HURRY UPPPPPPPPPPPP plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz........................................................................
oh and smut in the next ch
.............................................................................................................................................................................................HURRY UPPPPPPPPPPPP plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz........................................................................
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April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the idea of Kakashi being related to Naruto! Keep up the great work!
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April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love ya!
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April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that is the shit kakashi is naruto's uncle. i love this your story just keeps getting better and better. i cannot wait to see what you do next.
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April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OHMEHGAWD!! i didn't see that coming. until the paragraph paraphrasing the letter. that. is effed. up. but i LIKE it! great job, i hate sasuke, and i can't wait to see more! i'm hoping there isn't too much filler stuff from the anime, cuz i haven't watched it, but if there is, i'll just piece it together as well as i can! i just read three chapters at once, cuz i got way behind! go me! ^__^ anyway, i guess i'm going to bed now, and i'm going to pray for sasuke to... um, i guess return to sanity. or at least semi-sanity. stupid a-hole.~
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April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww - I was dreading the part where you'd write about Valley of the End, even if it's just slightly mentioned it always makes me taer up :S and I feel like killing Sasuke all over again which isn't a good thing because then naruto woldn't be able to get with Sasuke *sigh* anyway - right okay. I thought it was good chapter and the one about Kakashi being Yondaime's younger brother heh - I did not see that one coming but it's cool ^_6
Anyway, hope you update again soon, ne?
Hina xXxx
Anyway, hope you update again soon, ne?
Hina xXxx
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April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love this story! you have to update!!!!!