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by Jelp

person Hitomi_No_Ryu
schedule April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*just caught up with everyone else*

WOW! Not only you came up with a more original past to Naruto but gave a lot more depth to the "Yondaime's the father" theory...AWESOME!!

UPDATE SOON!!

PS Either have Naruto's mother or that Daimyo daughter make an appearance in the fic! PRETTY PLEASE WITH YAOI DOUJINS NO TOP!!
schedule April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter!

No. I didn´t see that coming. Kakashi and Yondamine. Is it true or did you make it up?

*waits (im)patiently for the next chapter*
person spikemyangel
schedule April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm one of those horrible people who never review anything, but OMG! that last twist!!! brilliant! omg, as much as I LOVE the main focus of the fic so far (SasuNaru 4 life!), now i really want you to expand on the uncle Kakashi thing, even if it's just a side fic with them hanging out, or you know....a long epic journey filled with angst and drama with a happy ending....
anyways.... >.> love the fic so far, yay you.
person Cianis
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is great! I cant wait to read what happens next! Please update soon!
person Halloween
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Zomg! I'm loving it so much xD
person dana
schedule March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i am so liking how you are doing this story. i got to see to updates at once (woo hah). i can't wait how you handle the whole sasuke leaving thing since he knows he has feelings for naruto and that oochamaru tried to kill naruto. i can't wait for the next update.
schedule March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really love all the things you've added in to the Naruto story. It's so much more interesting with the yaoi thrown in!!! :D
person Anon
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So, does Naruto really like Sasuke like he says? Hurry with the next chapter!!
person mukki
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You could update every single day and it still wouldn't be fast enough. I'm loving this story, and I can't wait to read more ;_;
So please update as soon as you can!
Also, thank you for writing lengthy, interesting chapters and not the five paragraph 'teasers' meant only to get reviews that are all too common in the fan fiction world.
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
waaaah! How can you stop there??? I want to read more.... *sniff*

I really liked Sasukes´ thoughts. About Itachi. About Naruto. About Itachi wanting to kill Naruto.
Okay, I don´t like the thought of Itachi killing Naruto! But that´s not going to happen, right?

I LOVED the last bit! Giddy Sasuke! Hee! Giddy Sasuke with Naruto, alone! YAY!

Hopefully Sakura takes her time to get some cake...

*watits (im)paitently for the next chapter*