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for Restless

by Jelp

person Anon
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That is just plan weird. Hurry with the next chapter!!!
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was le'dorable ^.^
oh shower sex without any water
they're such virgins
schedule March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Quite nice. Though, I always wonder about the whole 'fight, fight, fight...oops, we're naked and humping each other' situation. That is pretty much the way things would turn out, with the way this was going, so it works. Nice touch with the Chinese, too. That would be a very interesting way to explain why Naruto was behind in his studies. Keeping a close eye on this one.

a/j
schedule March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! i was so excited when i saw we were getting smex... and you delivered it so well!! great job, i can't wait for more! i also loved the part where he spoke chinese to the monks without knowing it. that was great, and sasuke was like "what the HELL???!" precious.~
person Anon
schedule March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter! Can't wait to read the next one!
person Mukki
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*melts into a little puddle of happy, satisfied goo*

I <3 you.
person Anon
schedule March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Sasuke jealous? Thats new. Awaiting the next chapter!!
schedule March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I love this story, update soon!
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahh!! hot man smex!!! yay! well... man-jerking-off-man-ness, but HOT!!!! i love this! i like the whole idea of naruto learning chinese first, and then teaching himself japanese with a little help! it was cute! 'give me some god damn food you dirty crook!' -- 6-year-old naru-chan... that was great!! i can't wait to see more, so please update soon!!!!~
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha...that was funny. Naruto's always trying to get some booty. But I can't remember was he really hurt that badly after his month training? I don't think so...well anyway it was great! I'm excited about the next chapter!!