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March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooh lala... very nice. ive never read a version of naruto's early life quite the same as this one and i must say that it is refreshing and unique. very interesting chapter and overall fic.
-direchan
-direchan
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March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just love the competition that Naruto and Sasuke are having about who will be the most dominant and stronger. Very hot! :)
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March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Things are really heating up between those two! Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL! Dude that was sexy! I really hope this fic goes to around manga chapt 344 if you keep it with the timeline...but this makes Sasuke leaving all the more sad...^_^ Great story!
*Me
*Me
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March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Liked this update alot. Very detailed and i love how you manage to string actual parts of the anime into your story, not an easy thing to do. I wonder what'll manage to write next. Good job.
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March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I love the idea of Sasuke molesting Naruto in his sleep! ;)
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March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH *brain melt* i have to say oblivious!naruto is my very favorite flavor ^.^ i hope sasuke gets some sense knocked into him, so that he can go knock some lovin into naruto before they kill each other
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February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good for you, Sasuke! You show that dobe by jerking him off and then telling him to go to sleep! LOL
Love the story. I can't wait to see what you have in store for the next chapter. You have a really great thing here!
Love the story. I can't wait to see what you have in store for the next chapter. You have a really great thing here!
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February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE it! Can't wait for the next one!
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February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is great!!! You must update soooon!!
You're writing has a very good flow and is enjoyable to read X )
You're writing has a very good flow and is enjoyable to read X )