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by Jelp

schedule February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O_O that was good! Heh leave it to Sasuke to play the sneak attack card! Wow I really like this, I'm looking forward to your next chapter ^^
person throwingrox
schedule February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I do so love this. :D
person Allys
schedule February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heh, LOL, that was one way to get your point across :D. Actually I think I like that method, they do say actions speak louder than words anyway, and the smut factor is always welcome, nice chappie, can't wait to see how you move through the story line, since there's the huge separation coming up and all.
schedule February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Phew, another good chap. So it seems that even though Sasuke is taken aback by Naruto's "dreams" he might take advantage of the little situation with all his frustration. Interesting....*cackels evilly*. Anyway, i can't wait to see what happens next and i think it's a great idea that the story's time period evolves. Smart.

And YES! OMIGOD, I DID READ CH. 343 AND I'M TRIPPIN' OUT STILL! Lol. Sasuke has climbed to the top of my list again. Update soon ya hear!
person Zrina
schedule February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hrmm, if that is whay Sasuke does when he is angry, then if I were Naruto I would try to piss him off every chance I got!! hehe
Great chapter! Can't wait to read more!!
person littleolmee
schedule February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story and great 2 chapters. The chapters were well written. I can't wait to see how Naruto and Sasuke are going to react to one another now and will you be changing Sasuke leaving then? Can't wait to see more from you. Take care and thanks for sharing the story.
schedule February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great second chapter! I really love this story! You make is so believable. :)
schedule February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another chapter!

Stupid Sasuke, not talking to Naruto. But it was kinda cute how his 'revenge' was a handjob. Poor, sexually frustrated young men!

I like it!
schedule February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really good story ^^ can't wait to see what happens next.
person barara
schedule February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL! Naruto is so innocent and naive! Cuteness!