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by Jelp

person LadyWolf
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WTF!!!!!!!!!!!!NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!WTF!!!!!!!!!!!..... Ok , he's not really dead right????? Somebody?????
person mango
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you're the best :D you update frequently, you have complete storylines and you respect your audience so much :D thanks for writingg!! :)
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear... this isn't looking good - the others are going to murder Sasuke for what he just did - I'm hanging onto the fact that i have a - tiny, thinning - string of faith in Sasuke-teme but i hate seeing Naruto hurt so Sasuke better BETTER make this worth it and beg Naruto for forgiveness - he still hasn't apologized for VotE either!!!

Ooohhh Nameless Desires gonna be updated too!!! wheeeee xXxxx much love to you
Thanks for the update!

Hina xXxx
person lolyah
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WTF!!! What in the world just happened? You left me so confused I don't understand a thing??? I hope you explain this until the next chapter, I will be waiting until then...
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thank you thank you thank you and even though i think that jelp means super mean author lady who tortures people with mind blowing cliff hangers i have to say i really loved this chapter so much stuff happened. of course i had to start reading from chapter 1 again put hey i am special like that ( i can't help it the story is so blazin espcially when i am watching naruto ship.). by the way naruto's grandmother is the shit and great grandpa ain't no whore either i loved the fight scene. when i read that the let's get ready to rumble went through my head and that just made the whole thing seem even funnier to me and i thought that was funny enough by itself. i also like how you described their understanding and love of each other it was sweet maybe even a little tear came out. i can't wait to see what happens at naruto's funeral i am really curious to see who's body that sasuke gave naruto.
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok, so I think I know where you're going with this, but still...YOU KILLED NARUTO! Itachi had better be dead in the next chapter to make up for this! You can't kill the main character then make his death pointless! That would be to much!
person Anon
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Have things gone from bad to worse now? How will this end? Hurry with the next chapter!!!
person fangirl
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. The love scene was awesome, hot and heartwarming. Evil cliffhanger so I'm glad you're gonna have a new chapter up soon. I don't believe for a second that Naruto is really/permanantly dead. I can't figure out how the Soul Tranfer technique or the poison vaccine Sasuke gave Naruto is gonna be used...so I'm hoping you'll tie off those loose ends with the next chapter.
person gaara89
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is great! Please update soon!
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know what I think? I think you should hurry up with the next chapter cuz I'm addicted. ja!