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"He had a family!
A crazy, bizarre, overly large, hyperactive family"

looooooool what was he expecting? loool has he ever noticed how hyperactive he is? loool :D And Sasuke's signal heh - well, not subtle but then I don't suppose he wanted it to be and his way of taking Naruto with him worked out for Naruto although it'll probably make things harder for him if he comes back to the village ne?

Anyway! So glad you updated ^_^ this is a great story, heh and I love Dokueki :D I really do heh

Hina xXxx

Great update! I really like this Kakashi being related to Naruto thing. Could u imagine if something like that actually happened in the manga? That fight with Sasuke and Oro was really good, badass. Anyway, Naruto stuck with Sasuke huh. Awesome. Though they are seriously gonna have to be careful with the newfound family plus Konoha gang and a newfound uncle after them i'm sure. It was worth the wait. Do update soon k?

What exactly is Sasuke's plan for Itachi and how do Kabuto and Naruto fit in? Hurry with the next chapter!!!

see, this is what should have happened rather than Sasuke hooking up with those other three gimps in the manga!! :D Am still loving the story!!

That was cool that Naruto has a family now! But I'm glad he still left to help Sasuke. :)

"You really have problemssss," Dokueki muttered. HAHAHAHAHA
The relationship between Sasuke and Dokueki is some of the best written. I love it. Add more between those two when you can. :D

Wow! This was a marathon! But a good one! Neally laughed my head off at Narutos "Nani?" I can clearly see the expression on his face *laughes some more*
One hour later: No really, you did great with this chappy! Just go on this way! Bye for the next Chapter! byebye^^

Chapter 1:
what a wonderful way to start a chapter. And even if Naruto was the one who rolled on sasuke...sasuke was the one who did the act. I can't wait to find out what he is going to say. Will he really talk to naruto about what happened that night. Since sasuke wanted for that to happen again doesn't that mean that he was kind of annoyed when kakashi said they would be back home that same night?

I have to say that the naru/sasu lemon was better then the sasu/naru one. That could be because naruto turned out to be a kinky sod and i like that kind of thing...common the only way he could breath was by getting the air from a naruto's mouth...double anal with two narutos. Common it's like identical twins...and we all know how great those can be...only in naruto's case their is more then even three. Sasuke should be happy that naruto stole that scroll and learned that technique. I like kyuubi…and what was with that whole licking naruto thing…I liked it…*smiles* has a whole idea of the kyuubi being able to take human form and he wants naruto and sasuke is jealous…but common how do you fight something that lives inside naruto….I kind of want to read it…hope I can find one…I really don’t like writing fan fiction…..sorry for getting off topic but it sounds cool ne? Either way, I love your sex scenes…that have a flare on the kinky side of things and common normal sex gets boring after a while without something to spice things up.

Will Sasuke's plan succeed or fail? And will about Naruto? Hurry with the next chapter!!