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OMG OMG OMG! I can't wait for the next chapter! I love it so far ^^ You left us hanging! What happens now? Who destroys who? OMG lol

there are no spaces in this chapter you need to fix it. Other then that it was a good chapter.

Okay, I can forgive the grammar issues, of which there are a lot, but . . . uggh, it's yet another Sasuke/Itachi incest story. I really hope that doesn't last because the prose, for all the sentence structure problems, is really quite good. Though, I would refrain from all the cliches. They aren't necessary. The writing is good without them, really. I'm hoping the incest isn't carried very far. I always find it ruins an otherwise great story. I'll read on and, with luck, it won't conmtinue and mar this otherwise strong piece.

I know it's probably been a while since you've worked on this story, but I randomly found it and started reading it. IT's FUCKING AWESOME!!! It would be incredible if you could continue it. I really want to know how things turn out now. It was so good I added to my favs of favorites list on my comp.

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Aw, please don't take a break! I love this story to bits. Unfortunately I really am bad at reviewing constructively, the only thing I have to say is that I love it, and that I would be ecstatic to see an update.

I love the way that this story is written and can't wait to see what will happen when Itachi comes for sasuke again and how things grow for sasuke and naruto. I hope you do keep this going it is a great story.

Ohh! This was sweet, but now I'm real real nervous about Itachi's reaction. Other than that I'd like to say, long time no see, and Parsons! I knew you rocked but damn girly, that's Great. Take as much time off as you need. I'll still be right here checking in as I'm sure a lot of your readers will. This is the kind of thing you need to see resolved. Thanks for the update, ja mata.

Yes there are still people reading and enjoying your story. Thanks for the update.

Well, well, well...we finally heard from Gaara. Hm, I understand his frustration! I wanted some Gaa x Naru too! Hmph!

I gotta say, I'm disliking Itachi even more and more, lol. I really don't like how he thinks. When is someone gonna put him in his place? Huh?

And Neji! Oh my gosh, what have you done to him?! What is going on?? You've turned him into somekinda girly-freak who has nothing better to do other than gossip...half of it crap that he made up!! Good Gawd! And it's funny as hell! [lOl] He actually...well he didn't seem like the type but now that I think about it...hmm...suits him still though. I'm sensing a bit of hostility towards Naruto because Gaara likes him? Does that mean Neji likes Gaara then? Plausible, but oh how I hate that pairing...

Anywayz, good chapter. Thanks for updating soon enough. And for that, you can have this:

*hands over a nice home-baked cookie sprinkled with compliments and love*

Eat up!


Can't wait for the next update! Ja!


Ki`Tara