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kinda like naruto meets the pretender i like it. is the kis in glasses who saved him shino. and the person who found him the night he ran away neiji. can't wait for more updates to find out.

wow. this is looking like it's going to be an amazing story. you have a lot of potential and it shows in this piece. i can not wait to see how this shapes up to be, i'm interested in it, my curiosity has been piqued. your characterization was superb, and i'm very curious to find out how onii-san is. please, please update soon! i'm eager to read what happens next!

great job!
~hanyou-elf

Awe i hope to read more of this! It sounds so promising!! An insanely intelligent Naruto? Who'd a thunk >_> Lol but yes! Keep writing!!! I'm eager to find out what awaits our incognito'ed blondie! =D

You have to update soon! My sanety comands it to remain!!!! Pleas!!! *pappy eyes*

other than 'where's the rest' not much to add. It is clear he was a torturous experiment for the snake man, that he was 'saved' by the hyuuga and 11 yrs later felt the need to leave his 'saviors' to forge a life of his own. Quite spectacularly if I might add... I really want to see where this is going. Its very promising, so yeah... continue your experiment... ok?