rate_review Reviews

I loved it, even the way that you left in hanging at the end. Though I do have one question and most likely I'll seem like an idoit. Seriously though, what does 'Usuratonkachi' mean? Because I have like no freaking clue... -_-

Wow! This was a great one-shot! It was so sad but had a happy ending to it. I love how you write. :)

hee, just like i said, here it is, your review! ^^ (btw, i am going to advertize a bit. i love the fic.)

aah, you should add the pairing in the summary outside, so people will come in and read. also, did you post it on FF too?

anyway, for the review per se.

just like i said the first time i read this, it's absolutely wonderful. the idea is fucking great and i love how you put it dowen, with naruto's depression and acceptance for his solitude and loneliness, to his speaking to himself as if someone was there (it made my heart clench... sigh) this fic gives out really a dark impression, and i love how you shared their emotions with us, it's really well written *huggles* (i mean even before the BETAing).

about sasuke, it's great he's there to help naruto, and it's great he decided to let itachi alive because he was with naruto every once in a while. and the picture of him playing the nohka was absolutely awesome. i loved that mental image.

absolutely wonderful thing you have here, and i am really really really happy you dedicated it to me... i feel so honoured *dies of happiness* it's angsty and cute and has nice end! waiiiii *clings* i can't show you how happy i am!

SOY/MF/Ceph

this was very well written. gods i feel so sorry for naruto, you have to admit though. the council did the right thing to control naruto. so many people forget naruto's dedication to his friends and family, but you did a wonderful job incorporating it. you know, i really think the way you wrote this was absolutely stunning. i have nothing constructive to say to you about this one shot. it was amazingly well written. your talent flows through every word and your potential shines. i look forward to more from you.

and i absolutely love the image of the flowers in teh moonlight.

beautiful job!
~hanyou-elf

It was absolutely beautiful the way it was! Now normally I want a full long story because I am greedy that way... but this is perfect the way it is!! It makes you wonder why Sasuke was able to free him... makes you wonder if he used the Sound resources and teamed up with Gaara to start a war anyway... or if perhaps the council met with an "end". Heck with Naruto being held, many of the ninja themselves could have revolted against the council rule... Like you said, it leaves the imagination open!!

Well done!!

man all i can say is wow.....

wow... this was... painfully beautiful. i am sorry that i can not leave some indepth review for this fantastic fanfic, but you have truly stunned me... congratulations...
-dire

Well that was just mean. Come on! You made me cry and then left it like that? How cruel. It was way good though. So sad to see Naru-chan locked away but nicely done just the same.