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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Glad you decided to update. Been waiting for a new chapter for a while. ^_^
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August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm starting to think that we won't see the next chapter at all. Huh
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August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story (ofcourse i love anything NaruHina) so hopefully the next chapter will be out soon!
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July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:O...this story is amazingly good. everything is well thought out, no plot holes, good plot... uber kudos to you
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July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh another note I am also of the opinion that NaruxHina is the most likely if not the best and cutest pairing
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July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you are one sadistic son of a bitch to put a guy like naruto in a position like that. two of the worst gossips in the village and not only is ass kicking protective older brother figure coming home but scary ass EXPERIENCED IN KICKING ASS dad is as well. I don't care if he's a cartoon that's just mean. oh well all the more interesting for us sadists ;)
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July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG its awsome!!! please please please update soon!
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June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! Really_good_thing. I only hope that you won't overload story with lemon, as you say in the Prologue ("in accordance to the story"). The 3-d chapter is beautiful too ;) Of course there is slow speed of making a chapters, but... Good work, anyway! Keep it going
p.s: it's funny - tomorrow I've an exam but instead of studying lessens I'm viewing NaruHina works :) yours, especially
p.s: it's funny - tomorrow I've an exam but instead of studying lessens I'm viewing NaruHina works :) yours, especially
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June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow XD You so have to update this soon. I guess that means Sakura, Ino, and Shika all know that Naruto and Hinata had sex? :P
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April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice story keep at it. Although if I may suggest you stay away from words like gender, manhood, member, sex, ect ect when describing sex scenes andf parts. Use more common words like cock pussy cunt, dick ect for a much more steamy story in my opinion. Keep at it and I look forward to the next chapters.